श्रवणसुभगम्
श्रवण · सुभग
श्रवणयोः सुभगम्
तत्पुरुष (locative) — lovely to the ears
तत्पुरुष — it agrees with गर्जितम्. good to hear
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मेघदूतम् · कालिदास · 1.11
रामगिरि · the geese to Kailāsa
कर्तुं यच्च प्रभवति महीमुच्छिलीन्ध्रामवन्ध्यां
तच्छ्रुत्वा ते श्रवणसुभगं गर्जितं मानसोत्काः
आ कैलासाद्बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः
सम्पत्स्यन्ते नभसि भवतो राजहंसाः सहायाः
pāda a
pāda b
pāda c
pāda d
कर्तुम् + यत् → कर्तुं
म् + य्
यत् + च → यच्च
त् + च्
महीम् + उच्छिलीन्ध्राम् → महीमुच्छिलीन्ध्रामवन्ध्यां
म् + उ
no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change
उच्छिलीन्ध्राम् + अवन्ध्याम् → महीमुच्छिलीन्ध्रामवन्ध्यां
म् + अ
no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change
तत् + श्रुत्वा → तच्छ्रुत्वा
त् + श्
श्रवणसुभगम् + गर्जितम् → श्रवणसुभगं
म् + ग्
गर्जितम् + मानसोत्काः → गर्जितं
म् + म्
कैलासात् + बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः → आ कैलासाद्
त् + ब्
भवतः + राजहंसाः → भवतो
ः + र्
no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change
श्रवण + सुभग → श्रवणसुभगम्
अ + स्
no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change
मानस + उत्क → मानसोत्काः
अ + उ → ओ · falls inside the syllable सो
बिस + किसलय → बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः
अ + क्
no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change
किसलय + छेद → बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः
अ + छ्
छेद + पाथेयवत् → बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः
अ + प्
no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change
राजन् + हंस → राजहंसाः
न् + ह्
Two joins here show the palatal series at work. यच्च is यत् + च: the dental त् becomes the palatal च् before च् (श्चुत्व). तच्छ्रुत्वा is तत् + श्रुत्वा: again त् turns palatal before श्, and the श् itself becomes छ् (श्चुत्व, then छत्व), so the two words fuse to तच्छ्रुत्वा. आ कैलासाद्बिसकिसलय is कैलासात् + बिस: the final त् is voiced to द् before the voiced ब्. भवतो राजहंसाः is भवतः + राजहंसाः, the visarga after अ becoming ओ before the voiced र्. Before a vowel म् stays म्, as in महीमुच्छिलीन्ध्राम्.
यत् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent
महीम् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object
उच्छिलीन्ध्राम् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object
अवन्ध्याम् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object
तत् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object
ते षष्ठी · genitive — सम्बन्ध, a relation to another word
गर्जितम् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object
with श्रवणसुभगम्
कैलासात् पञ्चमी · ablative — अपादान, the point of departure
नभसि सप्तमी · locative — अधिकरण, the location
भवतः षष्ठी · genitive — सम्बन्ध, a relation to another word
राजहंसाः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent
with मानसोत्काः, बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः
सहायाः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent
प्रकरण 1 · हलन्त्यम्
प्रकरण 2 · इको यणचि
प्रकरण 3 · स्तोः श्चुना श्चुः
प्रकरण 4 · वा शरि
प्रकरण 5 · अर्थवदधातुरप्रत्ययः प्रातिपदिकम्
प्रकरण 7 · अतोऽम्
प्रकरण 8 · हो ढः
प्रकरण 11 · स्वरादिनिपातमव्ययम्
प्रकरण 12 · लः कर्मणि च भावे चाकर्मकेभ्यः
प्रकरण 16 · स्वादिभ्यः श्नुः
प्रकरण 36 · तुमुन्ण्वुलौ क्रियायां क्रियार्थायाम्
प्रकरण 48 · शेषे
प्रकरण 59 · इवे प्रतिकृतौ
not in the abridgement
श्रवणसुभगम्
श्रवण · सुभग
श्रवणयोः सुभगम्
तत्पुरुष (locative) — lovely to the ears
तत्पुरुष — it agrees with गर्जितम्. good to hear
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मानसोत्काः
मानस · उत्क
मानसे उत्काः
तत्पुरुष (locative) — longing for Mānasa — the lake in the Himālaya the geese return to
तत्पुरुष — it agrees with राजहंसाः. their minds already on Lake Mānasa
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बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः
बिस · किसलय · छेद · पाथेयवत्
बिसानां किसलयानि
तत्पुरुष (genitive) — the young shoots of lotus fibre
बिसकिसलयानां छेदाः
तत्पुरुष (genitive) — bits broken off them
बिसकिसलयच्छेदाः पाथेयं येषां ते
बहुव्रीहि — [the geese] whose provisions are those bits
बहुव्रीहि — it refers to राजहंसाः. carrying snapped-off lotus shoots as food for the road
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राजहंसाः
राजन् · हंस
राजा हंसः
कर्मधारय — the royal goose — a kind, not a rank
कर्मधारय. the red-billed geese
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√कृ + तुमुन्
कर्तुम्
printed कर्तुं
कर्तुम्, from √कृ
to make — the infinitive that goes with प्रभवति, "is able to"
कर्तुम्, “to make”, is the infinitive of √कृ — the suffix तुमुन् on the root. It goes with प्रभवति, “is able”: प्र + √भू in the sense “to be equal to, to be able”, and a verb of ability takes the infinitive to say what one is able to do. So कर्तुम् प्रभवति is “is able to make”. This is the first तुमुन् infinitive in the poem to stand with a verb of capacity, and the pair कर्तुम् प्रभवति is the frame to learn: the deed in the infinitive, the power in the finite verb.
pronoun, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular
यत्
printed यच्च
यद्
which — the relative, picking up the thunder of the next line
अव्यय
च
printed यच्च
च
and
√भू, class 1, लट्, parasmaipada, third person singular
प्रभवति
√भू
is able — प्र + √भू, and it takes the infinitive
ī-stem feminine, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular
महीम्
printed महीमुच्छिलीन्ध्रामवन्ध्यां
मही
the earth — an ī-stem feminine
ā-stem feminine, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular
उच्छिलीन्ध्राम्
printed महीमुच्छिलीन्ध्रामवन्ध्यां
उच्छिलीन्ध्रा
with mushrooms sprung up — Mallinātha glosses उद्भूतकन्दलिकाम्
ā-stem feminine, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular
अवन्ध्याम्
printed महीमुच्छिलीन्ध्रामवन्ध्यां
अवन्ध्या
not barren, fruitful — Mallinātha glosses सफलाम्
pronoun, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular
तत्
printed तच्छ्रुत्वा
तद्
that — the thunder
√श्रु + क्त्वा
श्रुत्वा
printed तच्छ्रुत्वा
श्रुत्वा, from √श्रु
having heard — the earlier of the two things the geese do
pronoun, षष्ठी एकवचन genitive singular
ते
त्वद्
your
a-stem neuter, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular
श्रवणसुभगम्
printed श्रवणसुभगं
सुभग
lovely — and the compound says to what: to the ear
a-stem neuter, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular
गर्जितम्
printed गर्जितं
गर्जित
the thunder — a past participle used as a noun, "what has been roared"
a-stem masculine, प्रथमा बहुवचन nominative plural
मानसोत्काः
उत्क
longing — and the compound says for what: for Lake Mānasa
अव्यय, governing the ablative
आ
आ
as far as — the preposition that governs कैलासात्
a-stem masculine, पञ्चमी एकवचन ablative singular
कैलासात्
printed आ कैलासाद्
कैलास
from — with आ it means "all the way to Kailāsa"
at-stem masculine, प्रथमा बहुवचन nominative plural
बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः
पाथेयवत्
provisioned — the suffix वत् makes "having provisions for the road". A stem in वत् declines as an at-stem
बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः, “provisioned with snapped lotus shoots”, is a bahuvrīhi of four members ending in पाथेयवत्. पाथेय is “food for the road” (पथि भोज्यम्), and the suffix वत् (मतुप्) makes “having provisions for the road”. A stem in वत् declines as an at-stem, so the nominative plural is पाथेयवन्तः, with the strong न्त् before the ending; the generator builds no वत्-stem, so the word carries no table. The whole compound tells the geese’s habit: they break off young lotus fibre and carry it as travellers carry rations.
√पद्, class 4, लृट्, atmanepada, third person plural
सम्पत्स्यन्ते
√पद्
will turn out to be — सम् + √पद् in the future middle
सम्पत्स्यन्ते, “they will turn out to be, will fall in as”, the future (लृट्) of सम् + √पद्, third person plural, middle voice. √पद् is a fourth-class root (दिवादि) and conjugates in the middle only (ātmanepada), so the ending is the middle न्ते, and with सम् it means not “fall” but “come out as, prove to be”: the geese will prove to be your companions. The same root gave अव्यापन्नाम्, “not come to harm”, in the verse before.
as-stem neuter, सप्तमी एकवचन locative singular
नभसि
नभस्
in the sky — the same word that meant the month in verse 1.4, here the sky itself
at-stem masculine, षष्ठी एकवचन genitive singular
भवतः
printed भवतो
भवत्
your — the polite word again, in the genitive. भवत् is the polite word for you and stands where a pronoun would, but its endings are the ordinary at-stem ones
a-stem masculine, प्रथमा बहुवचन nominative plural
राजहंसाः
हंस
geese — and the compound makes them the royal kind, red-billed and red-footed
राजहंसाः is a karmadhāraya, राजा हंसः, “the royal goose” — but राजन् here names a kind, not a rank: Amara says the rājahaṃsas are the geese “white, with red bills and red feet”. They are the birds of Lake Mānasa in the Himālaya, and Mallinātha glosses सहायाः by सयात्राः, “fellow travellers” — so the verse makes them the cloud’s escort as far as Kailāsa, turning back to their lake as the cloud goes on.
a-stem masculine, प्रथमा बहुवचन nominative plural
सहायाः
सहाय
companions — Mallinātha glosses सयात्राः, fellow travellers
यत् · गर्जितम् · महीम् · उच्छिलीन्ध्राम् · अवन्ध्याम् · कर्तुम् · प्रभवति · च · ते · तत् · श्रवणसुभगम् · श्रुत्वा · मानसोत्काः · बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः · राजहंसाः · आ · कैलासात् · नभसि · भवतः · सहायाः · सम्पत्स्यन्ते
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the dependency structure
सम्पत्स्यन्ते · क्रिया — they will turn out to be, fall in beside you
राजहंसाः · कर्ता — the royal geese
मानसोत्काः · their minds already on Lake Mānasa — agreeing with राजहंसाः
बिसकिसलयच्छेदपाथेयवन्तः · carrying snapped lotus shoots as food for the road — a bahuvrīhi describing them
सहायाः · the predicate: companions — what they will turn out to be
भवतः · yours — genitive with सहायाः
नभसि · अधिकरण — in the sky
कैलासात् · as far as Kailāsa — ablative governed by आ
आ · up to — the preposition that governs the ablative
श्रुत्वा · having heard — the absolutive, what they do first
तत् · कर्म — that, the thunder
श्रवणसुभगम् · good to hear — agreeing with तत्
ते · yours — genitive with the thunder
गर्जितम् · the thunder named — antecedent of the relative
यत् · which — the relative picking up the thunder
प्रभवति · is able — the verb of the relative clause
कर्तुम् · to make — the infinitive प्रभवति governs
महीम् · कर्म — the earth
उच्छिलीन्ध्राम् · with mushrooms sprung up — agreeing with महीम्
अवन्ध्याम् · fruitful — agreeing with महीम्
च · and — joining the two things the thunder does
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And when they have heard that thunder of yours, which is good to hear and can make the earth send up mushrooms and bear, royal geese with their minds already on Lake Mānasa, carrying snapped lotus shoots for the road, will fall in beside you in the sky as far as Kailāsa.
uncheckedthe reader's reading, following Mallinātha's gloss
And when they have heard that thunder of yours — good to hear, and able to make the earth send up mushrooms and bear its crops — royal geese with their minds already on Lake Mānasa, carrying snapped lotus shoots for the road, will fall in beside you in the sky as far as Kailāsa, and be your companions.
No figure is named for this verse by the commentary this reading follows, so none is shown.