मेघदूतम् · कालिदास · 1.33

उज्जयिनी · the stories told to strangers

प्रद्योतस्य प्रियदुहितरं वत्सराजोऽत्र जह्रे

प्र
द्यो
त
स्य
प्रि
य
दु
हि
त
रं
व
त्स
रा
जो
ऽत्र
ज
ह्रे

हैमं तालद्रुमवनमभूदत्र तस्यैव राज्ञः

है
मं
ता
ल
द्रु
म
व
न
म
भू
द
त्र
त
स्यै
व
रा
ज्ञः

अत्रोद्भ्रान्तः किल नलगिरिः स्तम्भमुत्पाट्य दर्पाद्

अ
त्रो
द्भ्रा
न्तः
कि
ल
न
ल
गि
रिः
स्त
म्भ
मु
त्पा
ट्य
द
र्पाद्

इत्यागन्तून् रमयति जनो यत्र बन्धूनभिज्ञः

इ
त्या
ग
न्तू
न्र
म
य
ति
ज
नो
य
त्र
ब
न्धू
न
भि
ज्ञः

pāda a

  • प्रguruthe conjunct द्य that follows it
  • द्योguruits long vowel ओ
  • तguruthe conjunct स्य that follows it
  • स्यguruthe conjunct प्र that follows it
  • प्रिlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • यlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • दुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • हिlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • तlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रंguruthe anusvāra it carries
  • वguruthe conjunct त्स that follows it
  • त्सlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • राguruits long vowel आ
  • जोguruits long vowel ओ
  • ऽत्रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • जguruthe conjunct ह्र that follows it
  • ह्रेguruits long vowel ए
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — प्रद्योतस्य
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — प्रियदुहितरं

pāda b

  • हैguruits long vowel ऐ
  • मंguruthe anusvāra it carries
  • ताguruits long vowel आ
  • लguruthe conjunct द्र that follows it
  • द्रुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • वlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • नlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • भूguruits long vowel ऊ
  • दguruthe conjunct त्र that follows it
  • त्रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • तguruthe conjunct स्य that follows it
  • स्यैguruits long vowel ऐ
  • वlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • राguruits long vowel आ
  • ज्ञःguruthe visarga it carries
  • yati after 4 — it falls inside the compound तालद्रुमवनम्
  • yati after 10 — it falls inside अभूत्

pāda c

  • अguruthe conjunct त्र that follows it
  • त्रोguruits long vowel ओ
  • द्भ्राguruits long vowel आ
  • न्तःguruthe visarga it carries
  • किlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • लlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • नlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • लlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • गिlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रिःguruthe visarga it carries
  • स्तguruthe conjunct म्भ that follows it
  • म्भlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मुguruthe conjunct त्प that follows it
  • त्पाguruits long vowel आ
  • ट्यlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • दguruthe conjunct र्प that follows it
  • र्पाद्guruthe end of the pāda, which counts the last syllable heavy
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — अत्रोद्भ्रान्तः
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — नलगिरिः

pāda d

  • इguruthe conjunct त्य that follows it
  • त्याguruits long vowel आ
  • गguruthe conjunct न्त that follows it
  • न्तूguruits long vowel ऊ
  • न्रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • यlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • तिlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • जlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • नोguruits long vowel ओ
  • यguruthe conjunct त्र that follows it
  • त्रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • बguruthe conjunct न्ध that follows it
  • न्धूguruits long vowel ऊ
  • नlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • भिguruthe conjunct ज्ञ that follows it
  • ज्ञःguruthe visarga it carries
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — इत्यागन्तून्
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — जनो
  • प्रियदुहितरम् + वत्सराजः → प्रियदुहितरं

    म् + व्

  • वत्सराजः + अत्र → वत्सराजोऽत्र

    ः + अ → ओ

  • हैमम् + तालद्रुमवनम् → हैमं

    म् + त्

  • तालद्रुमवनम् + अभूत् → तालद्रुमवनमभूदत्र

    म् + अ

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • अभूत् + अत्र → तालद्रुमवनमभूदत्र

    त् + अ

  • तस्य + एव → तस्यैव

    अ + ए → ऐ

  • अत्र + उद्भ्रान्तः → अत्रोद्भ्रान्तः

    अ + उ → ओ

  • स्तम्भम् + उत्पाट्य → स्तम्भमुत्पाट्य

    म् + उ

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • दर्पात् + इति → दर्पाद्

    त् + इ

  • इति + आगन्तून् → इत्यागन्तून्

    इ + आ

  • जनः + यत्र → जनो

    ः + य्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • बन्धून् + अभिज्ञः → बन्धूनभिज्ञः

    न् + अ

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • प्रिय + दुहितृ → प्रियदुहितरम्

    अ + द्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • वत्स + राजन् → वत्सराजः

    अ + र्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • ताल + द्रुम → तालद्रुमवनम्

    अ + द्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • द्रुम + वन → तालद्रुमवनम्

    अ + व्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

Three sentences, and the joins mark each seam. वत्सराजोऽत्र is a visarga before short अ: वत्सराजः + अत्र gives वत्सराजो, the अ is swallowed, and its loss is written with the अवग्रह — वत्सराजोऽत्र (Pāṇini 6.1.113, 6.1.109, 6.1.87). तस्यैव is guṇa run to vṛddhi: तस्य + एव, अ meeting ए gives ऐ (6.1.88). अत्रोद्भ्रान्तः is plain guṇa, अ + उ to ओ (6.1.87), and इत्यागन्तून् is इति + आगन्तून्, the इ turning to य् before a vowel (6.1.77). तालद्रुमवनमभूदत्र shows a word-final त् voiced to द् before the vowel of अत्र (8.2.39): अभूत् + अत्र becomes अभूदत्र, and दर्पादिति the same, दर्पात् + इति to दर्पादिति.

  • Chinnaya Sūri, Bālavyākaraṇam — సంధిపరిచ్ఛేదము; vendor/balavyakaranam-sandhi.txt
  • प्रद्योतस्य षष्ठी · genitive — सम्बन्ध, a relation to another word

  • प्रियदुहितरम् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object

  • वत्सराजः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • हैमम् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • तालद्रुमवनम् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • तस्य षष्ठी · genitive — सम्बन्ध, a relation to another word

  • राज्ञः षष्ठी · genitive — सम्बन्ध, a relation to another word

  • उद्भ्रान्तः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • नलगिरिः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • स्तम्भम् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object

  • दर्पात् पञ्चमी · ablative — हेतौ पञ्चमी — an ablative of cause, not of departure; ‘out of rut’, not ‘away from’

    The ablative's default role is अपादान, the point a thing moves away from. दर्पात् is not that: it is the cause of the elephant's rampage, an ablative of reason (हेतौ पञ्चमी). Mallinātha glosses मदात्, ‘from the must,’ narrowing दर्प from pride in general to the one thing that makes a bull elephant tear its post out — the rut, not a place he leaves.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.33: darpānmadāt | stambhamālānam | utpāṭyoddhṛtya
  • आगन्तून् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object

  • जनः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • बन्धून् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object

  • अभिज्ञः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

प्रकरण 1 · हलन्त्यम्

प्रकरण 2 · इको यणचि

प्रकरण 3 · स्तोः श्चुना श्चुः

प्रकरण 4 · वा शरि

प्रकरण 5 · अर्थवदधातुरप्रत्ययः प्रातिपदिकम्

प्रकरण 7 · अतोऽम्

प्रकरण 8 · हो ढः

प्रकरण 11 · स्वरादिनिपातमव्ययम्

प्रकरण 12 · लः कर्मणि च भावे चाकर्मकेभ्यः

प्रकरण 21 · सत्यापपाशरूपवीणातूलश्लोकसेनालोमत्वचवर्मवर्णचूर्णचुरादिभ्यो णिच्

प्रकरण 22 · स्वतन्त्रः कर्ता

प्रकरण 26 · सुप आत्मनः क्यच्

प्रकरण 34 · ण्वुल्तृचौ

प्रकरण 36 · तुमुन्ण्वुलौ क्रियायां क्रियार्थायाम्

not in the abridgement

प्रियदुहितरम्

प्रिय · दुहितृ

  1. प्रिया दुहिता

    कर्मधारय — the daughter, and she is the dear one

कर्मधारय. his darling daughter — Mallinātha does not unpack the compound. He names her instead: वासवदत्ता, which is the whole of what a reader needed from it. The vigraha here is restored from his gloss rather than read out of it

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī (the identification), in a stanza he prints without a number and calls an interpolation; the vigraha restored“priyaduhitaraṃ vāsavadattāṃ”

वत्सराजः

वत्स · राजन्

  1. वत्सानां राजा

    तत्पुरुष (genitive) — the king of the Vatsas

तत्पुरुष. the king of Vatsa — Mallinātha names him and his country in one breath: वत्सदेशाधीश्वर उदयनः, Udayana, overlord of the Vatsa country. The compound is also a small lesson in what a compound does to its last word. राजन् on its own makes a nominative राजा; at the end of a tatpuruṣa it takes the affix टच् by Pāṇini 5.4.91 — राजाहस्सखिभ्यष्टच् — and becomes the a-stem राज, so the form here is वत्सराजः

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī (the identification), in a stanza he prints without a number and calls an interpolation; Pāṇini 5.4.91, by way of skt-mcp, for the samāsānta“vatsarājo vatsadeśādhīśvara udayanaḥ”

तालद्रुमवनम्

ताल · द्रुम · वन

  1. तालाः एव द्रुमाः

    कर्मधारय — palms, and they are the trees

  2. तालद्रुमाणां वनम्

    तत्पुरुष (genitive) — a wood of those trees

तत्पुरुष. a grove of palm trees — Mallinātha carries the compound into his gloss whole and unpacks only the word beside it, हैमम् as सौवर्णम्, of gold. So the grove is a real grove of palms and the whole of it is metal: a king's possession of the kind a story keeps rather than a thing anyone could plant

uncheckedDCS (members); Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī, who repeats the compound without unpacking it, in a stanza he prints without a number; the vigraha restored“haimaṃ sauvarṇaṃ tāladrumavanamabhūt”

  • a-stem masculine, षष्ठी एकवचन genitive singular

    प्रद्योतस्य

    प्रद्योत

    Pradyota's — Mallinātha says who he is: उज्जयिनीनायकस्य राज्ञः, the king who was this city's lord. The genitive reaches across the pāda to प्रियदुहितरम् and not to the nearer word

  • ṛ-stem feminine, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular

    प्रियदुहितरम्

    printed प्रियदुहितरं

    दुहितृ

    his daughter — Vāsavadattā, whom Mallinātha names. She is the object of जह्रे, and the accusative is the whole of the first story: somebody took her. It is a kinship term: the strong cases go to -अर् and stop, दुहितरम्, where an agent noun in ṛ would lengthen and give कर्तारम्

  • a-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    वत्सराजः

    printed वत्सराजोऽत्र

    राज, the a-stem राजन् becomes at the end of a tatpuruṣa

    the king of Vatsa — Udayana, whom Mallinātha names. He is the subject of जह्रे: the man who carried her off. राजन् takes the affix टच् at the end of a tatpuruṣa and declines as an a-stem from there, so the nominative is वत्सराजः and not the वत्सराजा the bare word would give

    वत्सराजः, “the king of Vatsa,” is Udayana, whom Mallinātha names with his country in one breath, वत्सदेशाधीश्वर उदयनः. The compound also teaches a small rule: राजन्, “king,” takes the affix टच् at the end of a tatpuruṣa, so the stem shortens and declines as an a-stem — वत्सराजः in the nominative, वत्सराजोऽत्र here. The proof is a line down, where the same word राज्ञन् stands free and declines its own way, राज्ञः in the genitive. The compound gives राजः; the free word gives राज्ञः; it is one noun in two dresses.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.33: vatsānāṃ rājā vatsadeśādhīśvara udayanaḥ
  • अव्यय

    अत्र

    printed वत्सराजोऽत्र

    अत्र

    here — Mallinātha fills it out as अत्र प्रदेशे, in this spot. The word stands three times in the stanza, once at the head of each story, and each time it is a hand pointing at ground the listener is standing on

  • √हृ, class 1, लिट्, atmanepada, third person singular

    जह्रे

    √हृ

    carried her off — the perfect, the tense for a past nobody present witnessed, which is exactly what a guide's story is. Mallinātha glosses it with जहार, the same tense in the other voice: √हृ takes either, and the choice of voice makes no difference he thought worth remarking on

    The stanza tells three stories and puts each in the past a different way, and the tenses are the lesson. जह्रे, “carried her off,” is the perfect (लिट्), the tense Sanskrit keeps for a past outside the speaker's own witness — परोक्षे लिट् — which is exactly what a guide's tale is. अभूत्, “there was,” is the aorist (लुङ्), a past that makes no claim about its own distance. उद्भ्रान्तः, “went rampaging,” is a participle, no finite tense at all, left standing with किल. One frame verb, रमयति, holds all three: the guide entertains kinsmen with talk of that sort.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.33: jahre jahāra | tāladrumavanamabhūt | udbhrāntaḥ … kila
  • a-stem neuter, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    हैमम्

    printed हैमं

    हैम

    of gold — Mallinātha glosses सौवर्णम्. हैम is हेमन्, gold, with the vṛddhi of its first vowel and the affix अण्: the taddhita that turns a material into 'made of it'. It is an adjective, neuter here with the तालद्रुमवनम् it describes

  • a-stem neuter, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    तालद्रुमवनम्

    printed तालद्रुमवनमभूदत्र

    वन

    a grove of palms — the subject of अभूत्, and the whole of the second story: it stood here, and it was gold

  • √भू, class 1, लुङ्, parasmaipada, third person singular

    अभूत्

    printed तालद्रुमवनमभूदत्र

    √भू

    there was — the aorist, a past that claims nothing about its own distance. Three stories, three ways of putting a thing in the past: the perfect for the carrying-off, this for the grove, and किल with a participle for the elephant

  • अव्यय

    अत्र

    printed तालद्रुमवनमभूदत्र

    अत्र

    here — the second of the three, and Mallinātha varies his own gloss to अत्र स्थले, in this place, so that the pointing does not go flat

  • pronoun, षष्ठी एकवचन genitive singular

    तस्य

    printed तस्यैव

    तद्

    of that one — and Mallinātha says which: तस्यैव राज्ञः प्रद्योतस्य, of that same king Pradyota. The pronoun reaches back over the first story to the man whose daughter was taken, not to the man who took her

  • अव्यय

    एव

    printed तस्यैव

    एव

    that very one — एव here identifies rather than excludes: the king of the second story is the king of the first, and the guide is saying so as he moves the party along

  • an-stem masculine, षष्ठी एकवचन genitive singular

    राज्ञः

    राजन्

    of the king — the same word that stood inside वत्सराजः a line earlier, standing here on its own and declining its own way: राज्ञः in the genitive, where the compound gave राजः in the nominative

  • अव्यय

    अत्र

    printed अत्रोद्भ्रान्तः

    अत्र

    here — the third and last, and it opens the pāda as the other two opened theirs. Three sentences, three spots, one word doing the work of the guide's arm

  • √भ्रम् + क्त, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    उद्भ्रान्तः

    printed अत्रोद्भ्रान्तः

    उद्भ्रान्त, from उद् + √भ्रम्

    went rampaging — a क्त participle with an active sense, which is what क्त gives a verb of motion: not the whirling done to him but the whirling he did. Mallinātha takes the उद् and the भ्रम् apart into two acts — उत्पत्य भ्रमणं कृतवान्, he sprang up and then did his whirling — and the finite verb he uses to gloss a participle is कृतवान्, itself a participle

  • अव्यय

    किल

    किल

    so they say — the particle of hearsay, and it is the one word in the stanza that admits the whole thing is a story. It stands over the third sentence and colours the other two, since the teller is the same

    किल is the particle of hearsay, “so they say,” and it is the one word in the stanza that admits the whole thing is a story. It stands over the third sentence, the elephant Nalagiri tearing out his tethering-post in rut, but it colours the other two as well: none of this was seen by anyone now living, and the guide is passing on what is passed to him. इति then closes all three at once — इत्थंभूताभिः कथाभिः, “with talk of that sort” — and hands them to रमयति. The stanza is built as a tour: अत्र, अत्र, अत्र, three times a pointing arm, and किल the honest word that the pointing is at legend.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.33: udbhrānta … kila | iti itthaṃbhūtābhiḥ kathābhiḥ
  • i-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    नलगिरिः

    नलगिरि

    Nalagiri — an elephant, and Mallinātha says so with नाम, 'by name', which is how a commentator marks a word that is not to be unpacked. So the word is left whole here too: it is a name, not a compound with a meaning to be got out of it

  • a-stem masculine, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular

    स्तम्भम्

    printed स्तम्भमुत्पाट्य

    स्तम्भ

    the post — Mallinātha glosses आलानम्, the stake an elephant is tethered to. The verse's word is the general one for a pillar or a post, and the gloss makes it the particular one this story needs

  • √पट् (10) + ल्यप्

    उत्पाट्य

    printed स्तम्भमुत्पाट्य

    उत्पाट्य, from उद् + √पट्

    having torn it up — Mallinātha glosses उद्धृत्य, having pulled it out, and answers an absolutive with an absolutive. The form is ल्यप् and not क्त्वा because the root carries a prefix; the stem it is built on is पाटय्, since a root of the tenth class forms its stem with णिच्

  • a-stem masculine, पञ्चमी एकवचन ablative singular

    दर्पात्

    printed दर्पाद्

    दर्प

    out of rut — Mallinātha glosses मदात्, from the must that comes on a bull elephant, which narrows दर्प from pride in general to the one thing that makes an elephant do this. The ablative gives the cause

  • अव्यय

    इति

    printed इत्यागन्तून्

    इति

    such — the word that closes a quotation, and here it closes all three stories at once. Mallinātha spells out what it is standing for: इत्थंभूताभिः कथाभिः, 'with talk of that sort', so इति is not quoting the words but naming the kind

  • u-stem masculine, द्वितीया बहुवचन accusative plural

    आगन्तून्

    printed इत्यागन्तून्

    आगन्तु

    come from elsewhere — Mallinātha glosses देशान्तरादागतान्, arrived from another country, and then names the affix: औणादिकस्तुन्प्रत्ययः, the तुन् of the Uṇādi list, which is what makes आगन्तु out of आ + √गम्. The Uṇādi affixes are the tradition's place for words that plainly come from a root but not by any rule of the Aṣṭādhyāyī. It is an adjective here, qualifying बन्धून्

  • √रम् with णिच्, class 1, लट्, parasmaipada, third person singular

    रमयति

    √रम् with णिच्

    entertains them — Mallinātha answers a causative with a causative, विनोदयति. रमयति is √रम् with णिच्: not taking pleasure but giving it. The root is ātmanepada on its own account — रमते, he enjoys himself — and the causative comes out parasmaipada, which is the ordinary way of it. This is the stanza's one present tense, and it is what the guide is doing while he tells the rest

    रमयति, “entertains them,” answers Mallinātha's विनोदयति and is √रम् with the causative णिच्. √रम् on its own is ātmanepada, “to take pleasure”; the णिच् turns it round to “to give pleasure,” and a causative of an ātmanepada root goes to parasmaipada, रमयति. So the townsman does not enjoy the stories — he makes his out-of-town kinsmen enjoy them. आगन्तून्, the kinsmen “come from elsewhere,” carries its own small grammar: Mallinātha names the affix, औणादिकस्तुन्प्रत्ययः, the तुन् of the Uṇādi list, which makes a word for the one who has come.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.33: ramayati vinodayati | āgantūndeśāntarādāgatān | “gamerantuk” ityādinauṇādikastunpratyayaḥ
  • a-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    जनः

    printed जनो

    जन

    the people — a singular that means everybody, as it has through the whole Ujjayinī stretch. Mallinātha adds कोविदः to it, the knowledgeable sort, so the subject is the townsman who knows his city's stories

  • अव्यय

    यत्र

    यत्र

    where — the relative that ties the stanza back to the city, and Mallinātha supplies the name it answers to: यत्र विशालायाम्, in Viśālā, which is Ujjayinī's other name. Against it stand the three अत्र of the stanza, which point inside the city the यत्र has already put us in

  • u-stem masculine, द्वितीया बहुवचन accusative plural

    बन्धून्

    printed बन्धूनभिज्ञः

    बन्धु

    his kinsmen — the object of रमयति, with आगन्तून् qualifying it: relatives who have come in from somewhere else. The stories are told to family, not to strangers, which is what makes the telling a kindness rather than a trade

  • a-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    अभिज्ञः

    printed बन्धूनभिज्ञः

    अभिज्ञ

    who knows — and Mallinātha says what he knows, by making the verse's bare word into a compound of his own: पूर्वोक्तकथाभिज्ञः, versed in the stories just told. The word is अभि + √ज्ञा, 'to recognise', and it takes what it recognises in a compound or in the genitive

अत्र · वत्सराजः · प्रद्योतस्य · प्रियदुहितरम् · जह्रे · अत्र · तस्य · एव · राज्ञः · हैमम् · तालद्रुमवनम् · अभूत् · अत्र · नलगिरिः · दर्पात् · स्तम्भम् · उत्पाट्य · उद्भ्रान्तः · किल · इति · अभिज्ञः · जनः · यत्र · आगन्तून् · बन्धून् · रमयति

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī, whose commentary is written as anvaya, in a stanza he prints without a number“atra pradeśe vatsarājo … pradyotasya … priyaduhitaraṃ … jahre | atra sthale tasyaiva rājña pradyotasya haimaṃ … tāladrumavanamabhūt | atra nalagirir … darpān … stambham … utpāṭya … udbhrānta … | abhijñaḥ … jana āgantūn … bandhūnyatra … ramayati”

the dependency structure

रमयति · क्रिया — entertains them, विनोदयति; the frame the three stories sit in, √रम् with णिच्: not taking pleasure but giving it

जनः · कर्ता — the people, a singular that means everybody; Mallinātha adds कोविदः, the knowledgeable sort, so the subject is the townsman who knows the tales

अभिज्ञः · agreeing with जनः — who knows them, पूर्वोक्तकथाभिज्ञः, versed in the stories just told

बन्धून् · कर्म — his kinsmen; the stories are told to family, not to strangers

आगन्तून् · agreeing with बन्धून् — come from elsewhere, देशान्तरादागतान्; the तुन् of the Uṇādi list makes a word of the one who has come

यत्र · where — यत्र विशालायाम्, the relative that ties the stanza back to the city

इति · such — इत्थंभूताभिः कथाभिः, with talk of that sort; the one word that closes all three stories at once and hands them to रमयति

जह्रे · क्रिया — carried her off, जहार; the perfect, the tense for a past nobody present witnessed, which is exactly what a guide's story is

अत्र · अधिकरण — here, अत्र प्रदेशे; the first of three, a hand pointing at ground

वत्सराजः · कर्ता — the king of Vatsa, Udayana, वत्सदेशाधीश्वर उदयनः, the man who carried her off

प्रियदुहितरम् · कर्म — his darling daughter, Vāsavadattā; the accusative is the whole of the first story, somebody took her

प्रद्योतस्य · षष्ठी — Pradyota's, उज्जयिनीनायकस्य राज्ञः; the genitive reaches across the pāda to the daughter, not to the nearer word

अभूत् · क्रिया — there was; the aorist, a past that claims nothing about its own distance

अत्र · अधिकरण — here, अत्र स्थले; Mallinātha varies his own gloss so the pointing does not go flat

तालद्रुमवनम् · कर्ता — a grove of palms, the whole of the second story: it stood here, and it was gold

हैमम् · agreeing with the grove — of gold, सौवर्णम्; हेमन् with vṛddhi and the affix अण्, the taddhita that turns a material into ‘made of it’

राज्ञः · षष्ठी — of the king; the same word that stood inside वत्सराजः a line earlier, declining now on its own

तस्य · षष्ठी — of that one, तस्यैव राज्ञः प्रद्योतस्य; the pronoun reaches back over the first story to Pradyota

एव · that very one — एव identifies rather than excludes: the king of the second story is the king of the first

उद्भ्रान्तः · went rampaging — a क्त participle with an active sense, which is what क्त gives a verb of motion: not the whirling done to him but the whirling he did

अत्र · अधिकरण — here, the third and last, opening the pāda as the other two opened theirs

नलगिरिः · कर्ता — Nalagiri, an elephant; Mallinātha marks it नाम, ‘by name’, the sign that a word is not to be unpacked

स्तम्भम् · कर्म — the post, आलानम्, the stake an elephant is tethered to

उत्पाट्य · having torn it up — उद्धृत्य; the form is ल्यप्, not क्त्वा, because the root carries the prefix उद्

दर्पात् · अपादान by case, हेतु by force — out of rut, मदात्

किल · so they say — the particle of hearsay, the one word that admits the whole thing is a story

uncheckedMallinātha’s Sañjīvinī, whose anvaya of this stanza he prints without a number, for the prose order and the reading; the Telugu drawn from Vedam Venkataraya Sastri’s Āndhra Meghasandeśam and the Bālānandinī

Where a man who knows the stories keeps kinsmen up from out of town amused with them: here the king of Vatsa carried off Pradyota's darling daughter; here that same king had his grove of golden palm trees; and here, they say, Nalagiri tore his tethering-post out of the ground in rut and went rampaging.

uncheckedthe reader's reading, following Mallinātha's gloss

Where a man who knows the stories keeps kinsmen up from out of town amused with them: here the king of Vatsa carried off Pradyota's darling daughter; here that same king had his grove of golden palm trees; and here, they say, Nalagiri tore his tethering-post out of the ground in rut and went rampaging.

  • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.33, whole-verse gloss

भाविक — The figure of vividness: something past or still to come is put in front of the eye as though it were happening, and what does it is the sheer wonder of the thing told. Mallinātha quotes the handbooks' line for it — अतीतानागते यत्र प्रत्यक्षत्वेन लक्षिते । अत्यद्भुतार्थकथनाद्भाविकं तदुदाहृतम्, "where past and future are marked as seen, by the telling of a matter past all wonder, that is called bhāvika."

Mallinātha names it of the whole stanza, and the stanza is built for nothing else. Three sentences of old story, each pinned to a spot by अत्र — here, here, here — and किल over the last of them to keep the teller outside what he tells. The one present-tense verb is रमयति, which is not part of any story but the thing being done now, in front of the listener. So the carrying-off, the golden grove and the elephant are all shown at the place they happened rather than reported from a distance, which is what the figure asks for: the past made present by being pointed at.

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī, citing the handbooks' definition, in a stanza he prints without a number“atra bhāvikālaṅkāraḥ | taduktaṃ — “atītānāgate yatra pratyakṣatvena lakṣite | atyadbhutārthakathanādbhāvikaṃ tadudāhṛtam” iti”