मेघदूतम् · कालिदास · 2.49

संदेश · the wheel that goes down and up

नन्वात्मानं बहु विगणयन्नात्मनैवावलम्बे

न
न्वा
त्मा
नं
ब
हु
वि
ग
ण
य
न्ना
त्म
नै
वा
व
ल
म्बे

तत् कल्याणि त्वमपि नितरां मा गमः कातरत्वम्

त
त्क
ल्या
णि
त्व
म
पि
नि
त
रां
मा
ग
मः
का
त
र
त्वम्

कस्यात्यन्तं सुखमुपनतं दुःखमेकान्ततो वा

क
स्या
त्य
न्तं
सु
ख
मु
प
न
तं
दुः
ख
मे
का
न्त
तो
वा

नीचैर्गच्छत्युपरि च दशा चक्रनेमिक्रमेण

नी
चै
र्ग
च्छ
त्यु
प
रि
च
द
शा
च
क्र
ने
मि
क्र
मे
ण

pāda a

  • नguruthe conjunct न्व that follows it
  • न्वाguruits long vowel आ
  • त्माguruits long vowel आ
  • नंguruthe anusvāra it carries
  • बlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • हुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • विlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • गlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • णlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • यguruthe conjunct न्न that follows it
  • न्नाguruits long vowel आ
  • त्मlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • नैguruits long vowel ऐ
  • वाguruits long vowel आ
  • वlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • लguruthe conjunct म्ब that follows it
  • म्बेguruits long vowel ए
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — नन्वात्मानं
  • yati after 10 — it falls inside विगणयन्

pāda b

  • तguruthe conjunct त्क that follows it
  • त्कguruthe conjunct ल्य that follows it
  • ल्याguruits long vowel आ
  • णिguruthe conjunct त्व that follows it
  • त्वlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • पिlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • निlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • तlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रांguruthe anusvāra it carries
  • माguruits long vowel आ
  • गlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मःguruthe visarga it carries
  • काguruits long vowel आ
  • तlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रguruthe conjunct त्व्म that follows it
  • त्वम्guruthe end of the pāda, which counts the last syllable heavy
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — कल्याणि
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — नितरां

pāda c

  • कguruthe conjunct स्य that follows it
  • स्याguruits long vowel आ
  • त्यguruthe conjunct न्त that follows it
  • न्तंguruthe anusvāra it carries
  • सुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • खlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • पlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • नlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • तंguruthe anusvāra it carries
  • दुःguruthe visarga it carries
  • खlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मेguruits long vowel ए
  • काguruits long vowel आ
  • न्तlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • तोguruits long vowel ओ
  • वाguruits long vowel आ
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — कस्यात्यन्तं
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — सुखमुपनतं

pāda d

  • नीguruits long vowel ई
  • चैguruits long vowel ऐ
  • र्गguruthe conjunct च्छ that follows it
  • च्छguruthe conjunct त्य that follows it
  • त्युlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • पlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रिlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • चlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • दlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • शाguruits long vowel आ
  • चguruthe conjunct क्र that follows it
  • क्रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • नेguruits long vowel ए
  • मिguruthe conjunct क्र that follows it
  • क्रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मेguruits long vowel ए
  • णlaghuits short vowel — light on its own, though the pāda ends here
  • yati after 4 — it falls inside गच्छति
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — दशा
  • ननु + आत्मानम् → नन्वात्मानं

    उ + आ

  • विगणयन् + आत्मना → विगणयन्नात्मनैवावलम्बे

    न् + आ

  • आत्मना + एव → विगणयन्नात्मनैवावलम्बे

    आ + ए → ऐ

  • एव + अवलम्बे → विगणयन्नात्मनैवावलम्बे

    अ + अ → आ

  • त्वम् + अपि → त्वमपि

    म् + अ

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • नितराम् + मा → नितरां

    म् + म्

  • कस्य + अत्यन्तम् → कस्यात्यन्तं

    अ + अ → आ

  • सुखम् + उपनतम् → सुखमुपनतं

    म् + उ

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • दुःखम् + एकान्ततः → दुःखमेकान्ततो

    म् + ए

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • नीचैः + गच्छति → नीचैर्गच्छत्युपरि

    ः + ग्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • गच्छति + उपरि → नीचैर्गच्छत्युपरि

    इ + उ

  • चक्र + नेमि → चक्रनेमिक्रमेण

    अ + न्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • नेमि + क्रम → चक्रनेमिक्रमेण

    इ + क्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

The first pāda is a chain of vowel-joins. ननु + आत्मानम् turns the final उ to व् before आ by Pāṇini 6.1.77 इको यणचि — नन्वात्मानम् — then विगणयन् doubles its न् before the vowel of आत्मना by 8.3.32 ङमो ह्रस्वादचि ङमुण्नित्यम् — विगणयन्नात्मना — then आत्मना + एव makes ऐ by वृद्धि, 6.1.88 वृद्धिरेचि — आत्मनैव — and एव + अवलम्बे lengthens to आ by 6.1.101 अकः सवर्णे दीर्घः — एवावलम्बे. In the last pāda नीचैः becomes नीचैर् before the voiced ग् by 8.2.66 ससजुषो रुः, and गच्छति turns its final इ to य् before the vowel of उपरि by 6.1.77 — नीचैर्गच्छत्युपरि. A word-final म् becomes anusvāra before म् by 8.3.23 मोऽनुस्वारः — नितरां मा — and is kept before a vowel, त्वमपि, सुखमुपनतं, दुःखमेकान्ततो.

  • Chinnaya Sūri, Bālavyākaraṇam — సంధిపరిచ్ఛేదము; vendor/balavyakaranam-sandhi.txt
  • आत्मानम् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object

  • बहु द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object

  • विगणयन् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • आत्मना तृतीया · instrumental — करण, the instrument or cause

  • तत् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object

  • कल्याणि सम्बोधन · vocative — a vocative shortened by rule, its feminine affix named

    कल्याणि, 'you good creature', is the vocative singular of कल्याणी, a नदी-class ī-stem feminine — a long-ī feminine that inflects like नदी, 'river'. Two rules shape it. The long ई is ङीष्, the feminine affix, which Mallinātha names — “बड्वादिभ्यश्च” इति ङीष्, Pāṇini 4.1.45 बह्वादिभ्यश्च, the feminine in ङीष् after the words of the बहु list, of which कल्याण is one. And the vocative shortens that long ई to short इ, कल्याणी → कल्याणि, by Pāṇini 7.3.107 अम्बार्थनद्योर्ह्रस्वः, which shortens a नदी-stem and words meaning 'mother' in the vocative singular. He glosses it सुभगे, 'fortunate one', and makes the compliment carry an argument — त्वत्सौभाग्येनैव जीवामीति भावः, the sense is that it is by your good fortune alone that I stay alive.

    • Aṣṭādhyāyī — 7.3.107 अम्बार्थनद्योर्ह्रस्वः; 4.1.45 बह्वादिभ्यश्च
    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 2.49: kalyāṇi subhage, tvatsaubhāgyenaiva jīvāmīti bhāvaḥ || “baḍvādibhyaśca” iti ṅīṣ
  • त्वम् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • कातरत्वम् द्वितीया · accusative — कर्म, the object

  • कस्य षष्ठी · genitive — सम्बन्ध, a relation to another word

  • अत्यन्तम् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • सुखम् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • उपनतम् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • दुःखम् प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • दशा प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • चक्रनेमिक्रमेण तृतीया · instrumental — करण, the instrument or cause

प्रकरण 1 · हलन्त्यम्

प्रकरण 2 · इको यणचि

प्रकरण 3 · स्तोः श्चुना श्चुः

प्रकरण 4 · वा शरि

प्रकरण 5 · अर्थवदधातुरप्रत्ययः प्रातिपदिकम्

प्रकरण 7 · अतोऽम्

प्रकरण 8 · हो ढः

प्रकरण 11 · स्वरादिनिपातमव्ययम्

प्रकरण 12 · लः कर्मणि च भावे चाकर्मकेभ्यः

प्रकरण 21 · सत्यापपाशरूपवीणातूलश्लोकसेनालोमत्वचवर्मवर्णचूर्णचुरादिभ्यो णिच्

प्रकरण 34 · ण्वुल्तृचौ

not in the abridgement

  • अ अ 8.4.68← विगणयन्; अवलम्बे; गमः; उपनतम्; गच्छति

चक्रनेमिक्रमेण

चक्र · नेमि · क्रम

  1. चक्रस्य नेमिः

    तत्पुरुष (genitive) — the rim of a wheel

  2. चक्रनेम्याः क्रमः, तेन

    तत्पुरुष (genitive) — the order in which that rim goes round

तत्पुरुष. in the way a wheel's rim goes — **and this is the stanza's only compound**, which is unusual in a poem that builds four-member compounds by the pāda; a proverb is said in short words. Mallinātha glosses each member out of a lexicon: चक्रस्य रथाङ्गस्य नेमिः तदन्तः, the rim being the wheel's outer edge, with Amara for it; and क्रमेण परिपाट्या, *in succession*, with Viśva for क्रम among *capacity* and *sequence*. **The rim is chosen and not the wheel**: a wheel turns in place, but a point on its rim is the thing that is alternately under and over

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī, who glosses चक्रस्य रथाङ्गस्य नेमिस्तदन्तः with “चक्रं रथाङ्गं तस्यान्ते नेमिः स्त्री स्यात्प्रधिः पुमान्” इत्यमरः and तस्याः क्रमेण परिपाट्या with “क्रमः शक्तौ परीपाट्याम्” इति विश्वः; DCS gives the members as चक्र, नेमि and क्रम. That the rim rather than the wheel is what the argument needs is the reader's“daśāvasthā cakrasya rathāṅgasya nemis tadantaḥ … tasyāḥ krameṇa paripāṭyā”

  • अव्यय

    ननु

    printed नन्वात्मानं

    ननु

    come now — **and Mallinātha picks one of five senses and names the list.** ननु इति आमन्त्रणे, ननु in the sense of address, with Amara quoted for the rest: प्रश्नावधारणानुज्ञानुनयामन्त्रणे ननु — question, affirmation, assent, coaxing, address. He takes the last, and glosses it by putting a vocative after it, ननु प्रिये. So the stanza does not open on an objection but on somebody turning to speak

  • an-stem masculine, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular

    आत्मानम्

    printed नन्वात्मानं

    आत्मन्

    myself — the object of the verb, and the same noun stands three words later as the instrument. **The pāda holds आत्मन् twice, in two cases**, and that is the whole of what it says: the thing held up and the thing that holds it are one man. Mallinātha keeps both, आत्मानमात्मनैव स्वेनैव

  • u-stem neuter, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular

    बहु

    बहु

    a great deal — an accusative neuter used adverbially with the participle, *reckoning much*. **Mallinātha reads it as the content of the reckoning and not its quantity**: what he is turning over is एवमेवं करिष्यामि, *I shall do this and this*, said again and again. The word for *much* becomes a word for *over and over*

  • √गण् + शतृ, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    विगणयन्

    printed विगणयन्नात्मनैवावलम्बे

    विगणयत्, from √गण् with वि, णिच् and शतृ

    reckoning up — a present active participle, agreeing with the unspoken *I* of the verb. √गण् is *to count*, and वि makes it *count out, work through*; Mallinātha's gloss makes it a man rehearsing plans, एवमेवं करिष्यामीत्यावर्तयन्. **DCS marks a participle without saying which, so the drafting script wrote क्त** — the second time in four stanzas, after पश्यन्तीनाम् at 2.46. It is शतृ, by Pāṇini 3.2.124 लटः शतृशानचावप्रथमासमानाधिकरणे

  • an-stem masculine, तृतीया एकवचन instrumental singular

    आत्मना

    printed विगणयन्नात्मनैवावलम्बे

    आत्मन्

    by myself — and **Mallinātha licenses the case with the vārttika he used two stanzas ago.** “प्रकृत्यादिभ्य उपसङ्ख्यानम्” इति तृतीया: the third case comes by an addition to the rule, after प्रकृति and words like it. At 2.47 the same line licensed दक्षिणेन, a road; here it licenses *oneself*, which is neither agent nor instrument in the ordinary way. He glosses it स्वेन एव, *by one's own self alone*. **The generator gets this cell wrong**: skt-data's `an-masc` gives आत्म्ना, applying 6.4.134 where 6.4.137 forbids it — the same gap that took आत्मनः at 2.41, and now one word away from आत्मानम्, which the same table gets right

  • अव्यय

    एव

    printed विगणयन्नात्मनैवावलम्बे

    एव

    and nothing else — attached to the instrumental, so what it shuts out is any other support. Mallinātha doubles it in his gloss, आत्मनैव स्वेनैव, keeping the particle on both words. **It is what makes the pāda a boast rather than a complaint**: he is not saying he has no one, he is saying he needs no one

  • √लम्ब्, class 1, लट्, atmanepada, first person singular

    अवलम्बे

    printed विगणयन्नात्मनैवावलम्बे

    √लम्ब् of the first class with अव

    I hold myself up — Mallinātha glosses धारयामि, *I support*, and then says what it comes to: **यथाकथञ्चिज्जीवामीत्यर्थः**, meaning, I stay alive by whatever means. The root is *to hang*, and with अव it is *to hang on to*; the man is his own handhold. **skt-data has no √लम्ब् at all**, so there is no table under either the bare root or the prefixed form

    The stanza reverses the seven before it. From 2.42 the message has been a man saying what he cannot do; here he says what he manages. अवलम्बे is धारयामि, 'I hold [myself] up', and then Mallinātha keeps the boast small — यथाकथञ्चिज्जीवामीत्यर्थः, I stay alive by whatever means. The whole argument is in one particle two words on, त्वमपि, 'you too': I hold myself up, so you too must not give way. And the vocative he glosses सुभगे and turns into a reason — त्वत्सौभाग्येनैव जीवामीति भावः, it is by your good fortune alone that I live — so the man who has just claimed to need nobody says in the next breath that he lives on her luck.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 2.49: avalambe dhārayāmi | yathākathañcij jīvāmītyarthaḥ … kalyāṇi subhage, tvatsaubhāgyenaiva jīvāmīti bhāvaḥ
  • pronoun, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular

    तत्

    तद्

    so then — the pronoun used as a connective, and Mallinātha spells out what it is short for: **तत्तस्मात्कारणात्**, *for that reason*. It is the hinge of the stanza: because I keep myself up, you too must not give way

  • ī-stem feminine, सम्बोधन एकवचन vocative singular

    कल्याणि

    कल्याणी

    you good creature — Mallinātha glosses सुभगे, *fortunate one*, and then makes the compliment do work: **त्वत्सौभाग्येनैव जीवामीति भावः**, the sense is that it is by your good fortune alone that I live. **And he names the affix**: “बड्वादिभ्यश्च” इति ङीष्, Pāṇini 4.1.45 बह्वादिभ्यश्च — the feminine in ङीष् after the words of the बहु list, of which कल्याण is one. That is his second naming of a feminine affix in six stanzas, after गौरादित्वात् ङीष् for चण्डि at 2.44. **DCS gives the stem as कल्याण and cannot place the ending**; read as कल्याणी it is an ordinary ī-stem skt-data declines

    The vocative gets a feminine affix named and a vocative rule to shorten it. कल्याणी is a नदी-class ī-stem, its long ई the affix ङीष्, which Mallinātha names — “बड्वादिभ्यश्च” इति ङीष्, Pāṇini 4.1.45, the feminine after the words of the बहु list — and in the vocative singular the long ई shortens to इ, कल्याणी → कल्याणि, by 7.3.107 अम्बार्थनद्योर्ह्रस्वः. It is his second naming of a feminine affix in six stanzas, after गौरादित्वात् ङीष् for चण्डि at 2.44. He glosses सुभगे and makes it the reason he lives at all.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 2.49: kalyāṇi subhage … “baḍvādibhyaśca” iti ṅīṣ
  • pronoun, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    त्वम्

    printed त्वमपि

    युष्मद्

    you — written out where Sanskrit would ordinarily let the verb's ending carry it, and the reason is the अपि beside it: *you too*, as against the आत्मन् of the first pāda. The pronoun exists to make the pair

  • अव्यय

    अपि

    printed त्वमपि

    अपि

    too — the fifth stanza running to turn on this particle, and here it makes the stanza's whole argument in one syllable: I hold myself up, so *you too*. Mallinātha carries it through unglossed, त्वमपि

  • अव्यय

    नितराम्

    printed नितरां

    नितराम्

    utterly — glossed अत्यन्तम्, which is the very word that opens the third pāda in its own right, so the commentary's word for this adverb is the verse's word for something else one line down. The adverb is inside the prohibition: not *do not at all* but *do not go utterly to pieces*

  • अव्यय

    मा

    मा

    do not — the prohibitive particle, which takes an aorist without its augment rather than an imperative. Mallinātha glosses the pair मा गमः as **मा गच्छ**, turning it into the imperative the construction avoids, and then names the rule that shapes the verb

  • √गम्, class 1, लुङ्, parasmaipada, second person singular

    गमः

    √गम् of the first class

    go — the aorist **without its augment**, which is what मा requires, and **this time the commentary names the rule the corpus had to supply at 2.37**: “न माङ्योगे” इत्यडागमाभावः, Pāṇini 6.4.74, no अट् in construction with मा. At 2.37 the same shape stood in मा भूत् and he said nothing about it. DCS tags both `l=lun_unaug`, a value with no Sanskrit name behind it, so `scripts/draft-analysis.ts` wrote no lakāra either time

    मा गमः is the augmentless aorist, and this time the commentary names the rule. “न माङ्योगे” इत्यडागमाभावः, Pāṇini 6.4.74 — no augment in construction with मा — and he glosses मा गच्छ, the imperative the construction avoids. At 2.37 the same shape stood in मा भूत् and he said nothing about it; DCS tags both `l=lun_unaug`, a value with no Sanskrit name behind it, so the drafting script wrote no lakāra either time. And the same root stands again two pādas down as गच्छति, of a life going down and up — 'do not go into cowardice', and 'fortune goes down and up'.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 2.49: mā gamaḥ mā gaccha || “na māṅyoge” ity aḍāgamābhāvaḥ … nīcair adha upari ca gacchati pravartate
  • a-stem neuter, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular

    कातरत्वम्

    कातरत्व, from कातर with त्व

    into cowardice — an abstract noun in त्व, by Pāṇini 5.1.119 तस्य भावस्त्वतलौ, *the state of being that*. Mallinātha glosses भीरुत्वम्, timidity, keeping the same affix and changing the stem. **DCS reads त्व as a compound member** and gives कातर and त्व as two words; the tradition reads it as an affix, which is why the analysis lists no compound here. The idiom is *to go to* a state where English would *become* it

  • pronoun, षष्ठी एकवचन genitive singular

    कस्य

    printed कस्यात्यन्तं

    किम्

    whose — the interrogative that turns the last half into a proverb, and Mallinātha supplies the noun: **कस्य जनस्य**, of what person. The question expects the answer *nobody*, which the verse never gives; it goes straight from the question to the wheel. DCS gives the stem as क where the tradition gives किम्, declined pronominally

  • a-stem neuter, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    अत्यन्तम्

    printed कस्यात्यन्तं

    अत्यन्त

    for good — agreeing with सुखम्, and Mallinātha glosses it **नियतम्**, *fixed, settled*, which is a stronger claim than *very much*: the question is not whether anyone is very happy but whether anyone's happiness is permanent. The word is literally *past the end*, अति + अन्त, and it is the same word he used a pāda earlier to gloss नितराम्

  • a-stem neuter, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    सुखम्

    printed सुखमुपनतं

    सुख

    happiness — the subject of the first half of the question, matched by दुःखम् in the second. **The pair is the plainest vocabulary in the poem**, and the stanza's argument needs it that way: a consolation offered as common knowledge has to be said in common words

  • √नम् + क्त, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    उपनतम्

    printed सुखमुपनतं

    उपनत, from √नम् with उप and क्त

    has come to hand — Mallinātha glosses प्राप्तम्, obtained, and the participle carries both halves of the question, the happiness and the sorrow. √नम् with उप is *to bend towards*, so what the verse says of good fortune is that it inclines to somebody. **The same participle stood at 2.40 as उपनतः**, of the news the cloud brings

  • a-stem neuter, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    दुःखम्

    printed दुःखमेकान्ततो

    दुःख

    sorrow — the second subject, and the वा at the pāda's end makes the two halves alternatives rather than a pair: *whose happiness, or whose sorrow, has come for good?* Mallinātha writes the participle in again for it, दुःखं वोपनतम्, which the verse does not repeat

  • अव्यय

    एकान्ततः

    printed दुःखमेकान्ततो

    एकान्ततस्

    without exception — an adverb in तस् built on एकान्त, *one end, an absolute*, and Mallinātha glosses it नियमेन, *as a rule*. It answers अत्यन्तम् across the pāda: the first half asks about happiness fixed for good, the second about sorrow that admits of nothing else. **The two adverbs are the whole question**, and the nouns between them are ordinary

  • अव्यय

    वा

    वा

    or — the last word of the pāda, joining the two halves of the question. Mallinātha keeps it where it stands, दुःखं वा, and the disjunction is what makes the proverb work in both directions: it consoles by the same rule that warns

  • अव्यय

    नीचैः

    printed नीचैर्गच्छत्युपरि

    नीचैस्

    down — an adverb in the shape of an instrumental plural, which is what नीचैस् and उच्चैस् are; Mallinātha glosses it with the plainer अधः. **The verse says *down* first and *up* second**, and the answer to the question above it is therefore that the fall comes before the rise, which is the order a man being consoled needs

  • √गम्, class 1, लट्, parasmaipada, third person singular

    गच्छति

    printed नीचैर्गच्छत्युपरि

    √गम् of the first class

    goes — and it is the same root as the गमः of the second pāda, two pādas apart: *do not go into cowardice*, and *fortune goes down and up*. Mallinātha glosses it प्रवर्तते, *keeps moving*, which is more continuous than *goes*, and then states the whole: **एवं जन्तोः सुखदुःखे पर्यावर्तेते इत्यर्थः**, so a creature's joy and sorrow turn about

  • अव्यय

    उपरि

    printed नीचैर्गच्छत्युपरि

    उपरि

    up — the counterpart of नीचैः, and the verb stands between them, so that the going is written once and read twice. Mallinātha leaves it as it is, उपरि च, and the arrangement is the wheel: the word for the motion is in the middle and the two ends are on either side

  • अव्यय

    च

    च

    and — joining the two directions, which is the only conjunction the stanza has. Everything else in it is asked or asserted without a joint

  • ā-stem feminine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    दशा

    दशा

    a man's condition — Mallinātha glosses **अवस्था**, which is the noun the सर्वावस्थासु of 2.48 was built on, one stanza back. There it was the day's stages; here it is a life's. The subject arrives late, after both its adverbs and its verb, so that the sentence has described the motion before it says what moves

  • a-stem masculine, तृतीया एकवचन instrumental singular

    चक्रनेमिक्रमेण

    क्रम

    in the wheel-rim's succession — the last word of the stanza, and Mallinātha puts a lexicon behind every part of it: Amara for नेमि as the wheel's outer edge, and Viśva for क्रम, क्रमः शक्तौ परीपाट्याम् — *क्रम* is used of capacity and of sequence, and he takes परिपाट्या, in order. **The image is not that life is a wheel but that it goes the way a rim goes**, which is a claim about order and not about shape

ननु · बहु · विगणयन् · आत्मानम् · आत्मना · एव · अवलम्बे · तत् · कल्याणि · त्वम् · अपि · नितराम् · कातरत्वम् · मा · गमः · कस्य · अत्यन्तम् · सुखम् · उपनतम् · एकान्ततः · दुःखम् · वा · दशा · चक्रनेमिक्रमेण · नीचैः · उपरि · च · गच्छति

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī, whose commentary runs as anvaya. **Nothing is supplied, for the fourth stanza running** — though he does write प्रिये in after ननु, which the verse does not need, since कल्याणि is already its vocative. What he moves is the last pāda, where the verse writes both adverbs and the verb before naming the subject and putting the instrumental last: he takes दशा and चक्रनेमिक्रमेण up in front of नीचैरध उपरि च गच्छति, so the thing that moves and the way it moves both stand before the motion. He also brings कातरत्वम् in front of मा गमः, where the verse has it after“nanu priye bahu vigaṇaya[n] … ātmānam ātmanaiva svenaiva … avalambe dhārayāmi | yathākathañcij jīvāmītyarthaḥ | tat tasmāt kāraṇāt | kalyāṇi subhage … tvam api nitarām atyantaṃ kātaratvaṃ bhīrutvaṃ mā gamaḥ mā gaccha … kasya janasyātyantaṃ niyataṃ sukham upanataṃ prāptam ekāntato niyamena duḥkhaṃ vopanatam | kiṃ tu daśāvasthā cakrasya rathāṅgasya nemis tadantaḥ … tasyāḥ krameṇa paripāṭyā … nīcair adha upari ca gacchati pravartate”

the dependency structure

अवलम्बे · क्रिया — I hold myself up, धारयामि; the present middle of √लम्ब् (to hang) with अव, first person singular. The root is to hang, and with अव it is to hang on to; the man is his own handhold. Mallinātha keeps the boast small — यथाकथञ्चिज्जीवामीत्यर्थः, I stay alive by whatever means. From this the injunction गमः and the wheel-proverb (गच्छति, उपनतम्) hang, for it is because he holds himself up that she too must not give way

ननु · — come now; the address particle, आमन्त्रणे, so the stanza opens not on an objection but on a man turning to speak

विगणयन् · विशेषण of the agent — reckoning up, विगणयन्; a present active participle agreeing with the unspoken 'I', a man working through his plans, एवमेवं करिष्यामीत्यावर्तयन्

बहु · — a great deal; an accusative neuter used adverbially, which Mallinātha reads as the content of the reckoning and not its quantity — over and over

आत्मानम् · कर्म — myself, आत्मानम्; the thing held up, one man with the thing that holds it

आत्मना · करण — by myself, स्वेन; the third case licensed by the vārttika प्रकृत्यादिभ्य उपसङ्ख्यानम्, and the same noun as आत्मानम् a word away, in a second case

एव · — and nothing else; attached to the instrumental, shutting out any other support — not that he has no one but that he needs no one

गमः · क्रिया — do not go, मा गच्छ; the augmentless aorist that मा requires, the second finite verb of the stanza and its injunction — you too must not go utterly to pieces

मा · — do not; the prohibitive particle, which takes the augmentless aorist rather than an imperative

कल्याणि · सम्बोधन — you good creature, सुभगे; and Mallinātha makes the compliment work — त्वत्सौभाग्येनैव जीवामीति भावः, it is by your good fortune alone that I live

त्वम् · कर्ता — you; written out where the verb's ending would carry it, for the sake of the अपि beside it

अपि · — too; the whole argument in one syllable — I hold myself up, so you too

नितराम् · — utterly, अत्यन्तम्; the adverb is inside the prohibition — not 'do not at all' but 'do not go utterly to pieces'

कातरत्वम् · कर्म — into cowardice, भीरुत्वम्; an abstract noun in त्व, and the idiom is 'to go to' a state where English would 'become' it

तत् · — so, तस्मात्कारणात्; the connective that is the hinge of the stanza — because I keep myself up, you too must not give way

उपनतम् · क्रिया — has come to hand, प्राप्तम्; the participle predicate of the proverb-question that grounds the injunction — whose happiness, or whose sorrow, has ever come for good?

कस्य · षष्ठी — whose, कस्य जनस्य; the interrogative that expects the answer 'nobody', which the verse never gives

अत्यन्तम् · — for good, नियतम्; a stronger claim than 'very much' — not whether anyone is happy but whether anyone's happiness is fixed

सुखम् · उद्देश्य — happiness, सुखम्; the subject of the first half, in the plainest vocabulary the poem has

दुःखम् · उद्देश्य — sorrow, दुःखम्; the second subject, matched against सुखम्

वा · — or; making the two halves alternatives — it consoles by the same rule that warns

एकान्ततः · — without exception, नियमेन; the answer to अत्यन्तम् across the pāda, sorrow that admits of nothing else

गच्छति · क्रिया — goes, प्रवर्तते; the wheel, a further finite verb and the second ground for the injunction — a man's condition goes down and up, so no state stays

दशा · कर्ता — a man's condition, अवस्था; the subject, arriving late, after both its adverbs and its verb

चक्रनेमिक्रमेण · करण — in the way a wheel's rim goes, चक्रनेम्याः क्रमेण; the claim is about order, not shape — a point on the rim is alternately under and over

नीचैः · — down, अधः; and the verse says down first, so the fall comes before the rise, which is the order a man being consoled needs

उपरि · — up; the counterpart of नीचैः, with the verb between them, so the going is written once and read twice

च · — and; the stanza's only conjunction, joining the two directions

uncheckedthe reader's reading, following Mallinātha's Sañjīvinī for the anvaya and the reading, which needs nothing supplied (he writes प्रिये in after ननु, but the verse's own vocative is कल्याणि); he glosses अवलम्बे as धारयामि with यथाकथञ्चिज्जीवामीत्यर्थः, आत्मनैव as स्वेनैव with the vārttika प्रकृत्यादिभ्य उपसङ्ख्यानम्, बहु विगणयन् as एवमेवं करिष्यामीत्यावर्तयन्, कल्याणि as सुभगे and names “बड्वादिभ्यश्च” इति ङीष् with त्वत्सौभाग्येनैव जीवामीति भावः, मा गमः as मा गच्छ with “न माङ्योगे” इत्यडागमाभावः, अत्यन्तम् as नियतम्, एकान्ततः as नियमेन, उपनतम् as प्राप्तम्, दशा as अवस्था, गच्छति as प्रवर्तते, and quotes Amara for नेमि and Viśva for क्रम; the Telugu drawn from Vedam Venkataraya Sastri's Āndhra Meghasandeśam. The tree roots at अवलम्बे, the man's one claim to hold himself up, with the injunction गमः and the wheel-proverb (गच्छति, उपनतम्) hung from it as its consequence and ground. No figure is named.

*Come now — I turn it all over and hold myself up by myself alone; so you too, good creature, must not go utterly to pieces. Whose happiness has ever come to stay, or whose sorrow come to be all there is? A man's condition goes down and up, the way a wheel's rim goes.* **The stanza reverses the last six.** From 2.42 the message has been a man saying what he cannot do; here he says what he manages, and the whole of the argument is in one particle: त्वमपि, *you too*. Mallinātha marks the turn in his own words at the head of the comment — न च मदीयदुर्दशाश्रवणाद्भेतव्यमित्याह, *and one is not to be frightened by hearing of my bad state, so he says this*. **And he keeps the boast small.** अवलम्बे is धारयामि, I hold up, and then **यथाकथञ्चिज्जीवामीत्यर्थः** — meaning, I stay alive by whatever means. The vocative he glosses सुभगे and turns into a reason: **त्वत्सौभाग्येनैव जीवामीति भावः**, it is by your good fortune alone that I live at all. So the man who has just claimed to need nobody says in the next breath that he lives on her luck. **One noun stands twice in one pāda, in two cases, and the generator gets one of them wrong.** आत्मानम् and आत्मना: skt-data declines the first correctly and gives आत्म्ना for the second, which is the same absent rule — 6.4.137 न संयोगाद्वमन्तात् — that took आत्मनः at 2.41. And the case of the second Mallinātha licenses with the vārttika he cited two stanzas ago for दक्षिणेन: **“प्रकृत्यादिभ्य उपसङ्ख्यानम्” इति तृतीया**. **Two affixes named, and one of them settles an old debt.** कल्याणि is ङीष् by “बड्वादिभ्यश्च”, 4.1.45, his second naming of a feminine affix after चण्डि at 2.44. And मा गमः is the augmentless aorist — “न माङ्योगे” इत्यडागमाभावः, 6.4.74. **That is the rule the analysis had to supply for itself at 2.37**, where मा भूत् stood in the same shape and he said nothing; DCS tags both `l=lun_unaug`, a value with no Sanskrit name behind it, and the drafting script wrote no lakāra either time. **The last half is a proverb and is built like one.** One compound in four pādas, which is rare in this poem; the nouns are सुख and दुःख, the plainest in the language; and what carries the argument is two adverbs, अत्यन्तम् glossed नियतम् and एकान्ततः glossed नियमेन, both of them meaning *for good*. The image is exact rather than decorative: not that life is a wheel but that it goes **चक्रनेमिक्रमेण**, in the way a rim goes — which is a claim about order, and the reason the rim is named and not the wheel is that a wheel turns in place while a point on its rim is alternately under and over. No figure is named.

uncheckedthe reader's reading, following Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī's gloss. His are: आमन्त्रणे for ननु with the Amara line, एवमेवं करिष्यामीत्यावर्तयन् for बहु विगणयन्, स्वेनैव for आत्मनैव with “प्रकृत्यादिभ्य उपसङ्ख्यानम्” इति तृतीया, धारयामि and यथाकथञ्चिज्जीवामीत्यर्थः for अवलम्बे, तस्मात्कारणात् for तत्, सुभगे for कल्याणि with “बड्वादिभ्यश्च” इति ङीष् and त्वत्सौभाग्येनैव जीवामीति भावः, अत्यन्तम् for नितराम्, भीरुत्वम् for कातरत्वम्, मा गच्छ with “न माङ्योगे” इत्यडागमाभावः, जनस्य supplied for कस्य, नियतम् for अत्यन्तम्, प्राप्तम् for उपनतम्, नियमेन for एकान्ततः, अवस्था for दशा with the Amara line for नेमि and the Viśva line for क्रम, अधः for नीचैः and प्रवर्तते for गच्छति, and the closing एवं जन्तोः सुखदुःखे पर्यावर्तेते इत्यर्थः; the lead-in न च मदीयदुर्दशाश्रवणाद्भेतव्यमित्याह and the staged objection तादृक्सुखिनोरावयोरीदृशि दुःखे कथं न विभेमीत्याशङ्क्याह are his also. That the stanza has one compound in four pādas, that the rim is chosen for the argument's sake, and that the boast is undone by the next clause, are the reader's; Pāṇini 3.2.124, 4.1.45, 5.1.119, 6.4.74, 6.4.134 and 6.4.137 are by way of skt-data's sūtra corpus, 4.1.45 and 6.4.74 named by him. The vārttika he cites is not in that corpus under its own words. Neither Amara's nor Viśva's text is in this repository and none of the three quoted lines can be checked; his gloss on बहु विगणयन् is corrupt in the copy between its two ends“avalambe dhārayāmi | yathākathañcij jīvāmītyarthaḥ … kalyāṇi subhage, tvatsaubhāgyenaiva jīvāmīti bhāvaḥ”

Come now — I turn it all over and hold myself up by myself alone; so you too, good creature, must not go utterly to pieces. Whose happiness has ever come to stay, or whose sorrow come to be all there is? A man's condition goes down and up, the way a wheel's rim goes. The last half is a proverb and is built like one: one compound in four pādas, the plainest nouns in the language, सुख and दुःख, and the argument carried by two adverbs both meaning 'for good', अत्यन्तम् glossed नियतम् and एकान्ततः glossed नियमेन. The image is exact — not that life is a wheel but that it goes in the way a rim goes, which is why the rim is named and not the wheel: a wheel turns in place, but a point on its rim is alternately under and over.

  • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 2.49, whole-verse gloss; evaṃ jantoḥ sukhaduḥkhe paryāvartete ityarthaḥ

No figure is named for this verse by the commentary this reading follows, so none is shown.