मेघदूतम् · कालिदास · 1.58

हिमालय · the bamboos, and the kinnarīs singing

शब्दायन्ते मधुरमनिलैः कीचकाः पूर्यमाणाः

श
ब्दा
य
न्ते
म
धु
र
म
नि
लैः
की
च
काः
पू
र्य
मा
णाः

संसक्ताभिस्त्रिपुरविजयो गीयते किंनरीभिः

सं
स
क्ता
भि
स्त्रि
पु
र
वि
ज
यो
गी
य
ते
किं
न
री
भिः

निर्ह्रादस्ते मुरज इव चेत् कन्दरेषु ध्वनिः स्यात्

नि
र्ह्रा
द
स्ते
मु
र
ज
इ
व
चे
त्क
न्द
रे
षु
ध्व
निः
स्यात्

सङ्गीतार्थो ननु पशुपतेस्तत्र भावी समग्रः

स
ङ्गी
ता
र्थो
न
नु
प
शु
प
ते
स्त
त्र
भा
वी
स
म
ग्रः

alternate reading निर्ह्रादी ते — for a word within pāda c, at syllables 1, 2. Shown, not analysed.

pāda a

  • शguruthe conjunct ब्द that follows it
  • ब्दाguruits long vowel आ
  • यguruthe conjunct न्त that follows it
  • न्तेguruits long vowel ए
  • मlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • धुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • निlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • लैःguruthe visarga it carries
  • कीguruits long vowel ई
  • चlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • काःguruthe visarga it carries
  • पूguruits long vowel ऊ
  • र्यlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • माguruits long vowel आ
  • णाःguruthe visarga it carries
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — शब्दायन्ते
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — मधुरमनिलैः

pāda b

  • संguruthe anusvāra it carries
  • सguruthe conjunct क्त that follows it
  • क्ताguruits long vowel आ
  • भिguruthe conjunct स्त्र that follows it
  • स्त्रिlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • पुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • विlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • जlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • योguruits long vowel ओ
  • गीguruits long vowel ई
  • यlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • तेguruits long vowel ए
  • किंguruthe anusvāra it carries
  • नlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रीguruits long vowel ई
  • भिःguruthe visarga it carries
  • yati after 4 — it falls inside संसक्ताभिः
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — संसक्ताभिस्त्रिपुरविजयो

pāda c

  • निguruthe conjunct र्ह्र that follows it
  • र्ह्राguruits long vowel आ
  • दguruthe conjunct स्त that follows it
  • स्तेguruits long vowel ए
  • मुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • जlaghuits short vowel, with no consonant after it
  • इlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • वlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • चेguruits long vowel ए
  • त्कguruthe conjunct न्द that follows it
  • न्दlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • रेguruits long vowel ए
  • षुguruthe conjunct ध्व that follows it
  • ध्वlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • निःguruthe visarga it carries
  • स्यात्guruthe end of the pāda, which counts the last syllable heavy
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — निर्ह्रादस्ते
  • yati after 10 — a word ends here — चेत्

pāda d

  • सguruthe conjunct ङ्ग that follows it
  • ङ्गीguruits long vowel ई
  • ताguruits long vowel आ
  • र्थोguruits long vowel ओ
  • नlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • नुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • पlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • शुlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • पlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • तेguruits long vowel ए
  • स्तguruthe conjunct त्र that follows it
  • त्रlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • भाguruits long vowel आ
  • वीguruits long vowel ई
  • सlaghuits short vowel, with a single consonant after it
  • मguruthe conjunct ग्र that follows it
  • ग्रःguruthe visarga it carries
  • yati after 4 — a word ends here — सङ्गीतार्थो
  • yati after 10 — it falls inside the compound पशुपतेः
  • मधुरम् + अनिलैः → मधुरमनिलैः

    म् + अ

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • संसक्ताभिः + त्रिपुरविजयः → संसक्ताभिस्त्रिपुरविजयो

    ः + त्

  • निर्ह्रादः + ते → निर्ह्रादस्ते

    ः + त्

  • मुरजे + इव → मुरज

    ए + इ

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • सङ्गीतार्थः + ननु → सङ्गीतार्थो

    ः + न्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • पशुपतेः + तत्र → पशुपतेस्तत्र

    ः + त्

  • त्रि + पुर → त्रिपुरविजयः

    इ + प्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • पुर + विजय → त्रिपुरविजयः

    अ + व्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

  • सङ्गीत + अर्थ → सङ्गीतार्थः

    अ + अ → आ · falls inside the syllable ता

  • पशु + पति → पशुपतेः

    उ + प्

    no rule named — the builder's table does not hold this change

Three word-seams in this verse turn a visarga to स् before the त् of the next word, संसक्ताभिस्त्रिपुरविजयो, निर्ह्रादस्ते, पशुपतेस्तत्र — a visarga before an unvoiced dental becoming the sibilant of that class (Pāṇini 8.3.34 विसर्जनीयस्य सः). सङ्गीतार्थो ननु turns the visarga of सङ्गीतार्थः to ओ before the voiced न् (सङ्गीतार्थः + ननु), the join the builder leaves unnamed because the same ओ can come from a रेफ stem or a रुत्व stem and the sounds alone cannot say which. मधुरमनिलैः carries the accusative म् on unchanged before the vowel of अनिलैः (मधुरम् + अनिलैः), as a word-final म् does before any vowel.

  • Chinnaya Sūri, Bālavyākaraṇam — సంధిపరిచ్ఛేదము; vendor/balavyakaranam-sandhi.txt
  • मधुरम् द्वितीया · accusative — क्रियाविशेषणे नपुंसकम् — a neuter accusative doing adverb duty, ‘sweetly’, not an adjective ‘sweet’

    The form is the accusative singular alike of the masculine and the neuter, and the two would say different things: as a masculine it would agree with a noun and mean ‘sweet,’ but as a neuter it is the accusative Sanskrit lets stand for an adverb, and it tells how the bamboos sound. Mallinātha reads it so, glossing मधुरं श्रुतिसुखं यथा तथा शब्दायन्ते, ‘they sound so as to be sweet to the ear’ — the यथा तथा is what makes it manner and not epithet.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.58: madhuraṃ śrutisukhaṃ yathā tathā śabdāyante
  • अनिलैः तृतीया · instrumental — करण, the instrument or cause

  • कीचकाः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

    with पूर्यमाणाः

  • त्रिपुरविजयः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • किंनरीभिः तृतीया · instrumental — करण, the instrument or cause

    with संसक्ताभिः

  • निर्ह्रादः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • ते षष्ठी · genitive — सम्बन्ध, a relation to another word

  • मुरजे सप्तमी · locative — अधिकरण, the location

  • कन्दरेषु सप्तमी · locative — अधिकरण, the location

  • ध्वनिः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • सङ्गीतार्थः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • पशुपतेः षष्ठी · genitive — शेषे षष्ठी — a genitive that hangs on the concert-material, ‘the concert for Paśupati’, not the agent or object of a verb

    The sixth case has no verb governing it here; it leans on सङ्गीतार्थः, ‘the material of a concert,’ and names whose concert it is. Mallinātha keeps Śiva unnamed in the verse and supplies him in the gloss, तत्र चरणसमीपे पशुपतेर्नित्यसन्निहितस्य शिवस्य सङ्गीतम्, ‘the concert of Paśupati, Śiva ever present there at the footprint.’ So the genitive marks the god the music is offered to, standing always by his own footprint.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.58: paśupater nityasannihitasya śivasya saṅgītam
  • भावी प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

  • समग्रः प्रथमा · nominative — कर्ता, the agent

प्रकरण 1 · हलन्त्यम्

  • हलन्त्यम् 1.3.3← संसक्ताभिः; गीयते; स्यात्
  • तस्य लोपः 1.3.9← अनिलैः; कीचकाः; पूर्यमाणाः; संसक्ताभिः; त्रिपुरविजयः; गीयते; निर्ह्रादः; मुरजे; ध्वनिः; स्यात्; सङ्गीतार्थः; पशुपतेः; भावी; समग्रः
  • सुप्तिङन्तं पदम् 1.4.14← संसक्ताभिः; गीयते; स्यात्; भावी

प्रकरण 2 · इको यणचि

प्रकरण 3 · स्तोः श्चुना श्चुः

प्रकरण 4 · वा शरि

  • ससजुषो रुः 8.2.66← अनिलैः; कीचकाः; पूर्यमाणाः; संसक्ताभिः; त्रिपुरविजयः; किंनरीभिः; निर्ह्रादः; ध्वनिः; सङ्गीतार्थः; पशुपतेः; समग्रः

प्रकरण 5 · अर्थवदधातुरप्रत्ययः प्रातिपदिकम्

प्रकरण 7 · अतोऽम्

प्रकरण 11 · स्वरादिनिपातमव्ययम्

प्रकरण 12 · लः कर्मणि च भावे चाकर्मकेभ्यः

प्रकरण 13 · अदिप्रभृतिभ्यः शपः

प्रकरण 30 · भावकर्मणोः

प्रकरण 59 · इवे प्रतिकृतौ

प्रकरण 60 · स्त्रियाम्

not in the abridgement

त्रिपुरविजयः

त्रि · पुर · विजय

  1. त्रयाणां पुराणां समाहारः

    द्विगु — the three cities taken as one thing

  2. त्रिपुरस्य विजयः

    तत्पुरुष (genitive) — the conquest of it

तत्पुरुष. the conquest of the Three Cities — Śiva's one great victory, the burning of the three flying fortresses of the demons, which is what a mountain choir would sing about. **Mallinātha spends his whole note on the first member and none of it on the second**, and what he settles there is a gender. His vigraha is त्रयाणां पुराणां समाहारः, 'the taking-together of three cities' — a समाहार, a collective, which is what makes the compound a dvigu rather than a plain numeral phrase. He licenses the compound by Pāṇini 2.1.51 तद्धितार्थोत्तरपदसमाहारे च, citing it by its opening words as the school does. Then पात्रादित्वान्नपुंसकत्वम्, 'its neuter gender comes of its being in the पात्रादि class': a collective compound is neuter to begin with by 2.4.17 स नपुंसकम्, and 4.1.21 द्विगोः would take an a-final dvigu into the feminine, and the पात्रादि list is the set of dvigus that rule is held back from. So त्रिपुरम् is neuter, and the word could as easily have been त्रिपुरी

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī, who gives the samāhāra, cites 2.1.51 by its opening words and argues the gender from the पात्रादि class; the texts of 2.1.51, 2.4.17 and 4.1.21 from skt-mcp. The पात्रादि list itself is a gaṇa, and skt-data carries no gaṇapāṭha, so what the class contains cannot be checked from the tools“trayāṇāṃ purāṇāṃ samāhārastripuram || “taddhitārthottarapada-” iti samāsaḥ | pātrāditvānnapuṃsakatvam || tasya vijayo gīyate”

सङ्गीतार्थः

सङ्गीत · अर्थ

  1. तदेव अर्थः

    कर्मधारय — the thing that is the concert, and nothing besides

कर्मधारय. the concert itself — and the compound is easy to read the other way, as 'the purpose of the concert' or 'the matter of the concert', which is what a sixth-case tatpuruṣa would give. Mallinātha shuts that off with two words: तदेव अर्थः सङ्गीतार्थः, 'that very thing is the artha' — the एव marks it as the kind of karmadhāraya in which the second member restates the first rather than governing it. Then he says what अर्थ means here, सङ्गीतवस्तु, 'the substance that is the concert', and proves the sense from Amara: अर्थोऽभिधेयरैवस्तुप्रयोजननिवृत्तिषु, 'artha is used of what is meant, of wealth, of a thing, of a purpose and of ceasing'. Five senses in the line and two of them would fit this compound; वस्तु, a thing, is the one he takes, and प्रयोजन, a purpose, is the one he passes over

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī, whose तदेव अर्थः marks the karmadhāraya and whose सङ्गीतवस्तु picks one of Amara's five senses of अर्थ“tadevārthaḥ saṅgītārthaḥ saṅgītavastu || “artho'bhidheyaraivastuprayojananivṛttiṣu” ityamaraḥ”

पशुपतेः

पशु · पति

  1. पशूनां पतिः

    तत्पुरुष (genitive) — the lord of creatures

तत्पुरुष. of Paśupati — the name is a compound and Mallinātha does not unpack it, which is what he does with a name that is not in doubt. What he does instead is say who it is and add a word the verse does not have: पशुपतेर्नित्यसन्निहितस्य शिवस्य, 'of Paśupati, that is, of Śiva, who is always present there'. The adjective is the load-bearing part. The stanza says a concert will come about; it does not say anyone is there to hear it, and नित्यसन्निहित supplies the listener, so the music is worship rather than an effect of weather on a mountain

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī, who identifies the name and adds नित्यसन्निहितस्य; the vigraha पशूनां पतिः is the standard one and he does not give it“paśupaternityasannihitasya śivasya”

  • √शब्दाय्, a denominative from शब्द, class 1, लट्, atmanepada, third person plural

    शब्दायन्ते

    शब्द, on the denominative stem शब्दाय्

    they make a sound — the word is not from a root at all but from a noun. Mallinātha derives it: शब्दायन्ते शब्दं कुर्वन्ति, स्वनन्तीत्यर्थः, 'śabdāyante means they make a śabda; that is, they sound', and the affix is क्यङ् by Pāṇini 3.1.17 शब्दवैरकलहाभ्रकण्वमेघेभ्यः करणे, which he cites by its opening words. That rule is a list of six nouns — śabda, vaira, kalaha, abhra, kaṇva, megha — that make a verb of their own in the sense of producing the thing; क्यङ् is a middle affix, which is why the ending is आत्मनेपद with nothing else in the stanza to make it so. The list Kālidāsa's word comes off has मेघ in it too, so the cloud being spoken to could have had a verb of its own made the same way

    शब्दायन्ते, “they sound,” is a denominative — a verb built straight from the noun शब्द, “a sound.” Mallinātha names the affix that does it, शब्दवैरकलहाभ्रकण्वमेधेभ्यः करणे इत्यादिना क्यङ्: the affix क्यङ् after शब्द in the sense of ‘making the sound,’ so शब्द becomes the middle verb शब्दायते, “to make a sound of its own.” The subject is कीचकाः, which is not the ordinary word for bamboo but the hollow kind that whistles: Mallinātha quotes Amara, वेणवः कीचकास्ते स्युर्ये स्वनन्त्यनिलोद्धताः, “bamboos are called kīcaka when, tossed by the wind, they sound,” so the very name carries the winds and the sound the verse then spells out.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.58: “śabdavairakalahā-” ityādinā kyaṅ; “veṇavaḥ kīcakāste syuḥ” ityamaraḥ
  • a-stem neuter, द्वितीया एकवचन accusative singular

    मधुरम्

    printed मधुरमनिलैः

    मधुर

    sweetly — a neuter accusative doing adverb duty, and this time the commentary says so outright. Mallinātha glosses मधुरं श्रुतिसुखं यथा तथा, 'so as to be pleasant to the ear': the यथा तथा frame is how a Sanskrit commentator marks an adverbial accusative, because it turns the word into a clause about the manner of the action. **That is exactly what he did not do one stanza back**, where व्यक्तं was open between the adverb and an adjective agreeing with चरणन्यासम् and his प्रकटम् left it open. Here nothing is left open, and the two stanzas together show that the silence at 1.57 was a silence rather than a habit

  • a-stem masculine, तृतीया बहुवचन instrumental plural

    अनिलैः

    printed मधुरमनिलैः

    अनिल

    by the winds — the instrumental of what fills the bamboos, and the plural is the mountain's winds rather than wind in general. Amara's definition of the bamboo Mallinātha quotes has the same word in it, ये स्वनन्त्यनिलोद्धताः, 'those which sound when the wind stirs them up', so the noun and the thing it acts on are defined by each other

  • a-stem masculine, प्रथमा बहुवचन nominative plural

    कीचकाः

    कीचक

    the whistling bamboos — glossed वेणुविशेषाः, 'a particular kind of bamboo', and Mallinātha calls two lexicons to say which kind. Amara defines the word by what it does: वेणवः कीचकास्ते स्युर्ये स्वनन्त्यनिलोद्धताः, 'those bamboos are kīcakas which sound when the wind stirs them' — so a kīcaka is not a species but a bamboo that whistles, hollow and pierced. The Viśva gives the word's other lives: कीचको दैत्यभेदे स्याच्छुष्कवंशे द्रुमान्तरे, 'kīcaka is used of a kind of demon, of dry bamboo and of another tree'. The demon is the Kīcaka of the Mahābhārata, and the middle sense is the one the stanza is built on. Mallinātha then says what the bamboos are for: अनेन वंशवाद्यसम्पत्तिरुक्ता, 'by this the supply of flute-music is stated' — the first of the three things his concert needs

  • √पॄ + यक् + शानच्, प्रथमा बहुवचन nominative plural

    पूर्यमाणाः

    √पॄ, on the passive stem पूर्य-

    being filled — a present participle built on a passive stem: यक् makes √पॄ passive and शानच् makes the participle, so the ending is the middle one for the same reason every passive in Sanskrit takes middle endings. The bamboos do not fill; they are filled, and the wind in the instrumental is the filler. What is filled is the hollow of the cane, which is what makes the noun and the participle a flute between them

  • √सञ्ज् + क्त, तृतीया बहुवचन instrumental plural

    संसक्ताभिः

    printed संसक्ताभिस्त्रिपुरविजयो

    संसक्त, from सम् + √सञ्ज्

    in company — and Mallinātha offers two readings of the word and then a third of the text. The two readings: संयुक्ताभिः, 'joined together', the kinnarīs singing with one another; or वंशवाद्यानुषक्ताभिः, 'keeping close to the bamboo-music', the singers following the flutes. The second is the musician's reading and it is the one that makes the stanza's three parts into one performance. **Then he names a different text.** संरक्ताभिः इति पाठे संरक्तकण्ठीभिरित्यर्थः — 'in the reading saṃraktābhiḥ, the sense is: with their throats in full voice'. That reading is exactly what DCS tags here, so where the tagged corpus parts from `text.md` at this word it is not making an error: it is carrying the other of two readings a fourteenth-century commentator already had in front of him and wrote down

  • a-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    त्रिपुरविजयः

    printed संसक्ताभिस्त्रिपुरविजयो

    विजय

    the victory — विजय is वि + √जि with घञ्, the noun of the action. It is the subject of the passive गीयते, which is what a passive does with what would otherwise be the object: the thing sung is what the sentence is about, and nobody has to be named as singing it except in the instrumental

    त्रिपुरविजयः, “the victory over the three cities,” is what the Kinnara women sing, and the compound is put together in two odd steps Mallinātha marks. त्रिपुर is “the three cities together,” त्रयाणां पुराणां समाहारः, a समाहारद्वन्द्व turned into one thing; and though पुर is neuter, the count-compound would be masculine but for a special rule, so he notes पात्रादित्वान्नपुंसकत्वम्, “it is neuter by belonging to the पात्रादि class.” The whole is then a genitive relation, तस्य विजयः, “the victory over it” — Śiva's burning of the three flying cities of the demons, the deed the caves echo with.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.58: trayāṇāṃ purāṇāṃ samāhāras tripuram; pātrāditvān napuṃsakatvam
  • √गै, class 1, लट्, passive, third person singular

    गीयते

    √गै

    is sung — the passive of √गै, whose stem before the passive यक् loses the ऐ to ई. Mallinātha carries the word over into his paraphrase without a gloss, which is what he does when a form is transparent. The singular is governed by त्रिपुरविजयः and not by the plural of the singers, which is the ordinary consequence of a passive: the thing sung is the subject

  • ī-stem feminine, तृतीया बहुवचन instrumental plural

    किंनरीभिः

    किंनरी

    by the kinnarīs — glossed किन्नरस्त्रीभिः, 'by the women of the kinnaras'. The kinnaras are the mountain's musicians, and the name is a question turned into a noun: किं नरः, 'what sort of man is this?' — a creature horse-headed or bird-bodied depending on which account is followed. The instrumental is the agent of the passive गीयते, which is the only case a passive lets an agent stand in

  • a-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    निर्ह्रादः

    printed निर्ह्रादस्ते

    निर्ह्राद, from निर् + √ह्राद्

    your rumbling — the noun of निर् + √ह्राद्, to resound, so it is the sound coming out rather than the making of it. Mallinātha reads it as this noun, ते तव निर्ह्रादः, and the variant `text.md` prints in brackets under the verse reads निर्ह्रादी, an in-stem adjective: 'your sound, resounding, would be like a drum's' instead of 'your rumbling would be like the sound in a drum'. The printed text gives the cloud a noise of its own and the variant makes the noise an attribute of ध्वनिः

  • pronoun, षष्ठी एकवचन genitive singular

    ते

    printed निर्ह्रादस्ते

    युष्मद्

    your — the short form of the genitive, which Sanskrit allows only where the word is not first in its clause and carries no stress. Mallinātha writes the full form beside it, ते तव, which is what a commentator does with an enclitic: the short form cannot open a sentence and the gloss can

  • a-stem masculine, सप्तमी एकवचन locative singular

    मुरजे

    printed मुरज

    मुरज

    in a drum — glossed वाद्यभेदे, 'in a kind of instrument'. **The printed मुरज is two words at once and only the commentary chooses between them.** Both मुरजे and मुरजः come out as मुरज before इव: the locative's ए becomes अय् and the य् then drops by the rule that lets a य् or व् go before a vowel, and the nominative's visarga simply falls. Mallinātha reads the locative, and his gloss proves it, because वाद्यभेदे agrees with it in case; DCS reads the nominative. The difference is what the comparison is between. On his reading it is your rumble against the sound in a drum, on DCS's it is your rumble against a drum. His own paraphrase, मुरजध्वनिरिवेत्यर्थः, comes to the same picture by a different road

  • अव्यय

    इव

    इव

    like — the particle of comparison, carried over unglossed. It is doing something the stanza needs and no figure is named for: the cloud's thunder is not called a drum, it is said to be like the sound in one, and the whole conditional hangs on that likeness being close enough to complete a concert

  • अव्यय

    चेत्

    चेद्

    if — and Mallinātha supplies the half of the sentence that Sanskrit leaves out: स्याच्चेत् तर्हि, 'if it should be, then'. There is no word for 'then' in the verse; the fourth pāda simply follows. Writing तर्हि in is what turns two statements standing side by side into a condition and its consequence

  • a-stem masculine, सप्तमी बहुवचन locative plural

    कन्दरेषु

    कन्दर

    in the caves — glossed दरीषु, and the Amara line he quotes for it settles a gender rather than a sense: दरी तु कन्दरो वा स्त्री, 'a cave is darī; kandara too, which is also feminine'. So the word is of both genders and the verse's ending picks one — कन्दरेषु is the masculine, and कन्दरासु would have been as correct. The caves are what make the drum: a sound in a hollow is what the whole comparison turns on, and Mallinātha's locative gloss of मुरज puts the cloud's thunder inside them

  • i-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    ध्वनिः

    ध्वनि

    sound — the word Mallinātha puts inside the drum, मुरजे ध्वनिः, so it is the noise a drum makes rather than the drum. It is the predicate of स्यात् and निर्ह्रादः is the subject: the sentence says one sound would be another, which is as close as Sanskrit gets to saying they are the same thing without a comparison particle. इव keeps it a comparison

  • √अस्, class 2, विधिलिङ्, parasmaipada, third person singular

    स्यात्

    √अस्

    should be — the optative in the plainest of its uses, the protasis of a condition: with चेत् beside it the mood is doing nothing but marking the clause as supposed. Mallinātha keeps the form and adds only तर्हि after it. It is the fourth optative in three stanzas — after लङ्घयेयुः, कुर्वीथाः and स्युः at 1.56 and परीयाः at 1.57 — and the fourth distinct job for one ending

  • a-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    सङ्गीतार्थः

    printed सङ्गीतार्थो

    अर्थ

    the concert — and what सङ्गीत covers is the whole of the stanza's argument. Mallinātha proves the word from the Śabdārṇava: तौर्यत्रिकं तु सङ्गीतम्, 'saṅgīta is the tauryatrika' — the threefold performance of song, instrument and dance taken together. A saṅgīta is therefore not music but a whole show, which is why समग्रः can be said of it at all and why it takes three separate things on the mountain to make one

  • अव्यय

    ननु

    ननु

    surely — glossed खलु, the particle of a thing taken as agreed. It is not the ननु of debate that opens an objection but the one that presses a conclusion the hearer is expected to grant. Put where it is, between the noun and the verb, it makes the last pāda an appeal rather than a prediction: the cloud is being told what it already knows would follow

  • i-stem masculine, षष्ठी एकवचन genitive singular

    पशुपतेः

    printed पशुपतेस्तत्र

    पति

    of Paśupati — Śiva as lord of creatures, and the genitive is the one whose concert it is. पति declines as an ordinary i-stem here because it stands at the end of a compound; on its own, in the sense of a husband, it takes a set of its own in the weak cases — पत्या, पत्ये, पत्युः — and being compounded holds that back. So the form the verse prints is the regular one and would not have been if the word stood alone

  • अव्यय

    तत्र

    printed पशुपतेस्तत्र

    तत्र

    there — and where 'there' is comes from the stanza before. Mallinātha glosses it तत्र चरणसमीपे, 'there, near the footprint', so the concert happens at the rock of 1.57 and not merely on the mountain. The word opened 1.57 as well, glossed then as हिमाद्रौ; two stanzas running use the same adverb and the commentary narrows it the second time

  • √भू + णिनि, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    भावी

    भाविन्, from √भू

    is going to be — and Mallinātha glosses it with a future finite verb, भविष्यति, then says why a noun can do a tense's work: भविष्यति गम्यादयः इति भविष्यदर्थे णिनिः, 'by the rule bhaviṣyati gamyādayaḥ, the affix ṇini in the sense of the future'. Pāṇini 3.3.3 is a list-rule — गमिन् and the words with it are formed with a future meaning built into them — so भाविन् is not 'being' but 'about to be', and the stanza's last word can be a predicate without a verb anywhere in the pāda

    भावी, “will surely come to be,” is not a finite verb but a future active participle, and it carries the whole point of the stanza: if the cloud adds its drum, then पशुपतेः समग्रः सङ्गीतार्थः भावी, “the material for a full concert of Śiva will be complete.” Mallinātha derives the form, भविष्यति गम्यादय इति भविष्यदर्थे णिनिः — the affix णिनि in the sense of the future, so √भू + णिनि gives भाविन्, “about to be.” The bamboos are the pipes, the Kinnaris the voices, the cloud’s thunder the drum: three of the instruments of a तौर्यत्रिक already stand, and one roll of thunder finishes it.

    • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.58: bhaviṣyati gamyādaya iti bhaviṣyadarthe ṇiniḥ
  • a-stem masculine, प्रथमा एकवचन nominative singular

    समग्रः

    समग्र

    complete — glossed सम्पूर्णः, and it is the word the whole stanza is built to earn. A saṅgīta needs all three of song, instrument and dance; the mountain has the flutes and the singers already, and what it has never had is the drum. The cloud's thunder is the missing third, so समग्रः is not praise of the music but a statement that the set is now closed

अनिलैः · पूर्यमाणाः · कीचकाः · मधुरम् · शब्दायन्ते · संसक्ताभिः · किंनरीभिः · त्रिपुरविजयः · गीयते · कन्दरेषु · ते · निर्ह्रादः · मुरजे · ध्वनिः · इव · चेत् · स्यात् · तत्र · पशुपतेः · समग्रः · सङ्गीतार्थः · ननु · भावी

uncheckedMallinātha, Sañjīvinī, whose commentary runs as anvaya. He opens it with a vocative the verse does not have, हे मेघ, addressed to the cloud; the address is not a word of the stanza and is not counted among these“he megha, anilaiḥ pūryamāṇāḥ kīcakā … madhuraṃ … śabdāyante … saṃsaktābhiḥ … kinnarībhiḥ … tasya vijayo gīyate || kandareṣu darīṣu … te tava nirhrādo muraje vādyabhede dhvaniriva … syāccettarhi tatra caraṇasamīpe paśupateḥ … saṅgītārthaḥ … samagraḥ sampūrṇo bhāvī nanu bhaviṣyati khalu”

the dependency structure

स्यात् · क्रिया of the conditional — should be, भवेत्; the optative of √अस्, the hinge चेत् … स्यात् the whole stanza turns on

निर्ह्रादः · कर्ता — your thunder-roar, गर्जितम्; the subject of स्यात्

ते · षष्ठी — of you, तव; the cloud's own roar

ध्वनिः · प्रधानोपमानम् — like the sound on a drum, मुरजध्वनिः इव; what the roar is said to be

मुरजे · अधिकरण — on a drum, वाद्यभेदे; where the sound is made

इव · उपमार्थे — like

चेत् · सम्बन्धसूचकम् — if; the particle that makes the clause a condition

शब्दायन्ते · क्रिया of a coordinate clause — sound, स्वनन्ति; the standing bamboo-music the roar would join

कीचकाः · कर्ता — the hollow bamboos, वेणुविशेषाः, that whistle when the wind fills them

अनिलैः · करण — by the winds, that fill them

पूर्यमाणाः · agreeing with कीचकाः — being filled, पूर्यमाणाः; a present passive participle

मधुरम् · क्रियाविशेषण — sweetly, श्रुतिसुखं यथा; a neuter accusative doing adverb duty

गीयते · क्रिया of a coordinate clause — is sung, गीयते; the second strand of the standing music

त्रिपुरविजयः · उक्तकर्म — the victory over the three cities, त्रिपुरस्य विजयः, sung as the passive's subject

किंनरीभिः · कर्तरि तृतीया — by the Kinnara women, किन्नरस्त्रीभिः; the agent of the passive गीयते

संसक्ताभिः · agreeing with किंनरीभिः — their voices joined to the bamboos, संयुक्ताभिः

कन्दरेषु · अधिकरण — in the caves, दरीषु; where the singing sounds

भावी · अपोदोसिस predicate (nominal) — will surely come to be, भविष्यति; the future active participle standing for the main clause the condition governs

सङ्गीतार्थः · कर्ता — the material of a full concert, सङ्गीतवस्तु; what the roar completes

समग्रः · agreeing with सङ्गीतार्थः — whole, सम्पूर्णः

पशुपतेः · षष्ठी — for Paśupati, शिवस्य; Śiva, ever near the spot

तत्र · क्रियाविशेषण — there, तत्र चरणसमीपे; at the god's footprint

ननु · वाक्यालङ्कार — surely, खलु; the particle of assurance

uncheckedMallinātha’s Sañjīvinī for the anvaya and the reading; the Telugu drawn from Vedam Venkataraya Sastri’s Āndhra Meghasandeśam and the Bālānandinī. The verse has three finite verbs and a nominal apodosis; the single tree is rooted at the conditional स्यात् and the drafter’s construal, with the coordinate clauses and the apodosis भावी hung under it.

Cloud: the hollow bamboos, filled by the winds, are sounding away sweetly; the kinnarīs, keeping together, are singing the burning of the Three Cities; and if your rumble in the caves should be like the sound inside a drum — then surely, there by the footprint, Śiva's concert will be complete. What makes the last line an argument rather than a compliment is one word Mallinātha defines from a lexicon: सङ्गीत is तौर्यत्रिक, the threefold performance, song and instrument and dance taken as one thing. A concert is complete when its parts are all present, so the stanza is counting. The mountain supplies the wind instruments and it supplies the voices, and it has never had percussion; the cloud is being told that what it brings is the one part missing, and that the god who is always there — नित्यसन्निहित, Mallinātha's word, not the poet's — has been waiting for it.

uncheckedthe reader's reading, following Mallinātha's gloss; the definition of सङ्गीत as तौर्यत्रिक is his, from the Śabdārṇava, and नित्यसन्निहित is his own addition to the stanza“tarhi tatra caraṇasamīpe paśupaternityasannihitasya śivasya saṅgītam || “tauryatrikaṃ tu saṅgītam” iti śabdārṇave”

The hollow bamboos, filled by the winds, pipe sweetly; and Kinnara women, their voices joined to that piping, sing in the caves of Śiva’s victory over the three cities. If your thunder-roar should sound there like the beat on a drum, then surely the whole material for a concert to Paśupati — who stands ever by his own footprint — will be complete.

  • Mallinātha, Sañjīvinī — 1.58, whole-verse gloss

No figure is named for this verse by the commentary this reading follows, so none is shown.